for Angel of Oblivion6/30/2006 c1 
1Heoga
Im normally not into the dragon Fantasy stories, but this is one that I'll keep reading for sure. I like how you combined Dragons along with Heaven and Angels. It gives a good twist to it, I cant wait to read more.
1HeogaIm normally not into the dragon Fantasy stories, but this is one that I'll keep reading for sure. I like how you combined Dragons along with Heaven and Angels. It gives a good twist to it, I cant wait to read more.
5/24/2006 c9 YuLian
O_O another rebellion? how confusing... but i'm sure it'll all be worked out, right?
-YuLian
O_O another rebellion? how confusing... but i'm sure it'll all be worked out, right?
-YuLian
5/10/2006 c7 hiro-0911
simple yet cute! I liked the name Senna ^_^ However i suggest you put more descriptions rather than bombarding the whole thing with speaking lines all through out. Especially putting a little more details on the setting . . . that wouldn't hurt wont it? take care ^_^
simple yet cute! I liked the name Senna ^_^ However i suggest you put more descriptions rather than bombarding the whole thing with speaking lines all through out. Especially putting a little more details on the setting . . . that wouldn't hurt wont it? take care ^_^
4/28/2006 c6 5Meira Evenstar
Glad you updated! I hope you'll post some more soon! Keep up the good work!
5Meira EvenstarGlad you updated! I hope you'll post some more soon! Keep up the good work!
4/27/2006 c6 Apollo Versaeus
Awesome, brilliant, outstanding! I loved it. It had such depth. But there were a few problems regarding spelling. Anyway I felt that you described the other characters more vividly than Senna which shouldn't be. And try to describe the Fall and the Flight better I don't understadn the Flight at all. Overall Brilliant!
Awesome, brilliant, outstanding! I loved it. It had such depth. But there were a few problems regarding spelling. Anyway I felt that you described the other characters more vividly than Senna which shouldn't be. And try to describe the Fall and the Flight better I don't understadn the Flight at all. Overall Brilliant!
4/4/2006 c4 Aka No Hotaru
No Senna!
A little constuctive critiscism...(sp? lol) You might want to spell check your chapters because there's a lot of errors in it...Just a tip XD
No Senna!
A little constuctive critiscism...(sp? lol) You might want to spell check your chapters because there's a lot of errors in it...Just a tip XD
4/4/2006 c1 Aka No Hotaru
Oh O.o Nice first chapter. Uhh I suck at this reviewing thing so I'm going to stop now and read the rest of your story lol.
Oh O.o Nice first chapter. Uhh I suck at this reviewing thing so I'm going to stop now and read the rest of your story lol.
4/4/2006 c5 Meira Evenstar
Another good chapter! I feel for Senna. I hope that Kaggren will be able to save her soon. I got so tickled at your description of Sid- that his face looked like something somebody threw up. I love it! lol. I can't wait for another update. I hope it will be soon. Until then, keep up the great work!
~Meira~
Another good chapter! I feel for Senna. I hope that Kaggren will be able to save her soon. I got so tickled at your description of Sid- that his face looked like something somebody threw up. I love it! lol. I can't wait for another update. I hope it will be soon. Until then, keep up the great work!
~Meira~