for Angel of Oblivion4/4/2006 c4 YuLian
EK! XP she is captured! y do they want Senna and what r they gonna do w/ her? i wanna noe...
-YuLian
EK! XP she is captured! y do they want Senna and what r they gonna do w/ her? i wanna noe...
-YuLian
4/4/2006 c3 YuLian
wow, so brave! i didn't even notice there was another chapter... i'm just such an idiot
-YuLian
wow, so brave! i didn't even notice there was another chapter... i'm just such an idiot
-YuLian
4/4/2006 c2 YuLian
ugh, voices in her head? that would drive any1 insane... XP interesting, she gets 2 c her dad...
-YuLian
ugh, voices in her head? that would drive any1 insane... XP interesting, she gets 2 c her dad...
-YuLian
3/31/2006 c3 
1demiXgod
ooh, not bad. I like this story, so I'll be sure to follow it. But i don't have time to read chapter 4, so I'll review it later.
Senna seems awfully complacent about being the ruler of Oblivion, though. I'd expect her to worry about seeing her mother and comparing herself to namoki and namor.
i don't know if it's a regional thing or a typo, but you spell "fought" like "faught". just an fyi.
The millenium dragon and senna have both been nicely developed thus far. Kaggren's personality seems a little foggy to me, but it's only the third chapter and your chapters are kind of short, so I won't get on you about it. Nice descriptions, btw. I like your writing style.
Ill get back to you when I read chapter 4.
~demiXgod
1demiXgodooh, not bad. I like this story, so I'll be sure to follow it. But i don't have time to read chapter 4, so I'll review it later.
Senna seems awfully complacent about being the ruler of Oblivion, though. I'd expect her to worry about seeing her mother and comparing herself to namoki and namor.
i don't know if it's a regional thing or a typo, but you spell "fought" like "faught". just an fyi.
The millenium dragon and senna have both been nicely developed thus far. Kaggren's personality seems a little foggy to me, but it's only the third chapter and your chapters are kind of short, so I won't get on you about it. Nice descriptions, btw. I like your writing style.
Ill get back to you when I read chapter 4.
~demiXgod
3/29/2006 c3 Meira Evenstar
I'm glad you updated! I'm very intrigued with your story. Please update again very soon! You're doing a great job.
~Meira~
I'm glad you updated! I'm very intrigued with your story. Please update again very soon! You're doing a great job.
~Meira~
3/28/2006 c1 Meira Evenstar
I really like your story so far, and I hope you will update it very, very soon!
~Meira~
I really like your story so far, and I hope you will update it very, very soon!
~Meira~