for Just Your Simple Smile10/20/2006 c1 vcut
imagine giving that poem to PA. the dude with the creepy smile. lmao.
imagine giving that poem to PA. the dude with the creepy smile. lmao.
7/12/2006 c1 
3R. A. Faith
Wow. You pretty much concluded up all you could feel from a smile in about... only ten lines. And yeah, it's short, but it has the same impact that a long poem has.
3R. A. FaithWow. You pretty much concluded up all you could feel from a smile in about... only ten lines. And yeah, it's short, but it has the same impact that a long poem has.
4/9/2006 c1 156ShadowPharoh
wow. i really enjoyed reading this. lol. made me smile. ^_^
i adore the last line.
"like an idiot in love"
that is SO me. lol.
thx for the reviews on my story and its sequel. i probably wont update for a while, since im kinda out of the whole fictionpress thing. lol. but im working on it. so dont murder me! lol. ^_^
*miss sp*
156ShadowPharohwow. i really enjoyed reading this. lol. made me smile. ^_^
i adore the last line.
"like an idiot in love"
that is SO me. lol.
thx for the reviews on my story and its sequel. i probably wont update for a while, since im kinda out of the whole fictionpress thing. lol. but im working on it. so dont murder me! lol. ^_^
*miss sp*
3/28/2006 c1 2Ellesmere
your poem is amazing. it has everything inside 10 or 11 simple lines.
u provided imagery that we can see while at tha same time, explaining how u feel. and your lines were very strong, able 2 carry the reader into the next line.
keep up tha good work
~Ellesmere~
2Ellesmereyour poem is amazing. it has everything inside 10 or 11 simple lines.
u provided imagery that we can see while at tha same time, explaining how u feel. and your lines were very strong, able 2 carry the reader into the next line.
keep up tha good work
~Ellesmere~
3/28/2006 c1 92q is for quirks
that's just what it feels like, i can completely relate. wonderful, wonderful, WONDERFUL poem! simple, but sweet. yes, it's short, but i don't think it really needs to be any longer. great job!
and thank you SO...MUCH...for reviewing! you made my day!
92q is for quirksthat's just what it feels like, i can completely relate. wonderful, wonderful, WONDERFUL poem! simple, but sweet. yes, it's short, but i don't think it really needs to be any longer. great job!
and thank you SO...MUCH...for reviewing! you made my day!