for Why?4/11/2007 c1 
11Torn and Tattered
I liked this. It had a nice rhythm through it throughout. It's a rare case that i go to another author's work, since i beta and all alot, but i remember you from one of my forums a while back.
but again, this was a nice piece of work. keep up the writing!
TAD
11Torn and TatteredI liked this. It had a nice rhythm through it throughout. It's a rare case that i go to another author's work, since i beta and all alot, but i remember you from one of my forums a while back.
but again, this was a nice piece of work. keep up the writing!
TAD
3/28/2006 c1 1SoLongJimmy
Alright... Brilliant poem... Seriously loved it BUT...
I'm trying hard not go into the regions of the flame here... But (as a bordering emo *is shamed*) you said yourself that poetry is a way to express how you feel.
If you happen to feel like crap isn't it alot easier to let the world know about it than to suffer in total isolation?
( incase you want to rant about this... however i swear it was NOT a flame... not much of one).
1SoLongJimmyAlright... Brilliant poem... Seriously loved it BUT...
I'm trying hard not go into the regions of the flame here... But (as a bordering emo *is shamed*) you said yourself that poetry is a way to express how you feel.
If you happen to feel like crap isn't it alot easier to let the world know about it than to suffer in total isolation?
( incase you want to rant about this... however i swear it was NOT a flame... not much of one).
3/28/2006 c1 4run rabbit run
interesting viewpoint. good one too really... too much "angsty" bullshit goin on. ah but what do you feel of the ones who are just crazy? i say there should be chaos and entropy in all art (aherm) thus this too will die. makes me smile really.cheers-rabbit
4run rabbit runinteresting viewpoint. good one too really... too much "angsty" bullshit goin on. ah but what do you feel of the ones who are just crazy? i say there should be chaos and entropy in all art (aherm) thus this too will die. makes me smile really.cheers-rabbit