for Lost7/25/2006 c1 
65SarahJaneDrkAngl05
wow that was so good! and its so true! i love it! keep up the good work!
~SarahJane
65SarahJaneDrkAngl05wow that was so good! and its so true! i love it! keep up the good work!
~SarahJane
6/9/2006 c1 97rust phoenix
This is beautiful. Your style is very unique. It's simple, but not in the "I have a dog his name is spot he likes to eat and drink a lot" way. It's more in the using-few-words to tell a deep feeling. It's nice. It shows Japanese cultural influences! Okay, I don't really know what I'm trying to say. I'm weird today... ^_^
97rust phoenixThis is beautiful. Your style is very unique. It's simple, but not in the "I have a dog his name is spot he likes to eat and drink a lot" way. It's more in the using-few-words to tell a deep feeling. It's nice. It shows Japanese cultural influences! Okay, I don't really know what I'm trying to say. I'm weird today... ^_^
5/12/2006 c1 1KyuubiANBU
funky form you have there, still gets the point across. cool thing with the 'pond water green' too. noone likes that color, same as noone likes being lost.
1KyuubiANBUfunky form you have there, still gets the point across. cool thing with the 'pond water green' too. noone likes that color, same as noone likes being lost.
4/7/2006 c1 Blank1379
This is good, and I think I liked it even more because of the fact that I've never felt exactly like this. It's easy to say, "Oh, yeah, I know what you mean," and then read a poem. With this one, I couldn't, and that made it even more interesting.Good job, mellon nin.Namarie-Smeagol Fasir Kenobi
This is good, and I think I liked it even more because of the fact that I've never felt exactly like this. It's easy to say, "Oh, yeah, I know what you mean," and then read a poem. With this one, I couldn't, and that made it even more interesting.Good job, mellon nin.Namarie-Smeagol Fasir Kenobi
3/28/2006 c1 879Moondog Dozier
This has an emptiness feeling to it that makes the reader connect well with the emotion. Very visual. The "Lost", feeling comes across well. Well done.
879Moondog DozierThis has an emptiness feeling to it that makes the reader connect well with the emotion. Very visual. The "Lost", feeling comes across well. Well done.
3/28/2006 c1 The Postscript
Finally. A love poem with emotion, sparkle, and uniqueness. Whatever you did to create this piece, in all it's sparkle and thought - this was amazing. You bring emotion to love...unlike the past few love poems I've read. I love the images in this from ripples to cherry blossoms. It's a poem with a large range of colors yet you blend them all together as well. Nice job with this. Keep writing.
Finally. A love poem with emotion, sparkle, and uniqueness. Whatever you did to create this piece, in all it's sparkle and thought - this was amazing. You bring emotion to love...unlike the past few love poems I've read. I love the images in this from ripples to cherry blossoms. It's a poem with a large range of colors yet you blend them all together as well. Nice job with this. Keep writing.