
8/29/2007 c1
17scenester7002
That would soo piss me off too. Note To Self: Never ever date someone who has a twin brother, and get drunk. Anywho. good story!

That would soo piss me off too. Note To Self: Never ever date someone who has a twin brother, and get drunk. Anywho. good story!
7/17/2007 c1 Rachel
I like it. It's pretty good. (better than me I must say) From the way you talk I presume you are doing a sequel? If so, I can't wait. TTYL
I like it. It's pretty good. (better than me I must say) From the way you talk I presume you are doing a sequel? If so, I can't wait. TTYL
3/15/2007 c1 nana
Well that sucks! I sorta feel bad for Dani, only that though because she did cheat on her boyfriend. But those two are unforgivable!
Well that sucks! I sorta feel bad for Dani, only that though because she did cheat on her boyfriend. But those two are unforgivable!
10/20/2006 c1
1whyshouldicare1
i hope there's another chapter because i'm still i bit confused with evan and dani. if evan loves her, then how is she alone?

i hope there's another chapter because i'm still i bit confused with evan and dani. if evan loves her, then how is she alone?
10/18/2006 c1 Jugglingbearperformer
Wow..that is terrible. All of them were messed up..but still I felt bad for Dani in the end, I cried just a tad :( It was good, don't be so hard on yourself, if it was really THAT bad, would you have posted it? hmm. Good job.
Wow..that is terrible. All of them were messed up..but still I felt bad for Dani in the end, I cried just a tad :( It was good, don't be so hard on yourself, if it was really THAT bad, would you have posted it? hmm. Good job.
5/19/2006 c1 icedfaerie
Wow...I have nothing else to say, that's how good this was...and it was very sad...but good job!
Wow...I have nothing else to say, that's how good this was...and it was very sad...but good job!
4/13/2006 c1
3Sapphire Wings
Wow O.O That was so unexpected haha! I can't write one-shots for beans...so that one really hit me hard on the head. I guess it shows reality though because it happens a lot to teenage girls now...being used I mean =S not sure about that situation though. I liked the dialogue and idea =) You might not proud of it, but I like it haha! Write a new one soon and update your stories! ^^

Wow O.O That was so unexpected haha! I can't write one-shots for beans...so that one really hit me hard on the head. I guess it shows reality though because it happens a lot to teenage girls now...being used I mean =S not sure about that situation though. I liked the dialogue and idea =) You might not proud of it, but I like it haha! Write a new one soon and update your stories! ^^
4/4/2006 c1 snuggie
Let me get this straight. YOU ARE ONLY MAKING ONE CHAPTER OF THIS? It was so sad. Great one!
Let me get this straight. YOU ARE ONLY MAKING ONE CHAPTER OF THIS? It was so sad. Great one!
3/30/2006 c1 miele
Not bad, though I like foxified better :P Hint Hint.
Though yeah, a follow up chapter would probably be good, explaining the relationship between Erik and Evan.
Not bad, though I like foxified better :P Hint Hint.
Though yeah, a follow up chapter would probably be good, explaining the relationship between Erik and Evan.
3/29/2006 c1
14Tell me its not true
its good, you should write a second chappie, to explain the follow up and why he did it and evans response but yeah very gd!

its good, you should write a second chappie, to explain the follow up and why he did it and evans response but yeah very gd!