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4/19/2006 c7 insanitystrikesthrice
Wow! I am so glad I was just skimming the recent updates, which I usually don't do. This story is one of the best I've seen on this site yet- the way you write is light-hearted, but your main character Dru is still quite deep and very intelligent. I love Alex, it would be so nice if all guys were like him ^_^! Stacy and Cindy are rotten brats, and I can't help but smile thinking about them somehow becoming ugly, like if they got burnt really badly or something. I'm already dying waiting for your next update. Get it done soon, please! My life depends on it!
4/19/2006 c7 16Trickster's-Lulaby
It doesn't make sense for Drusilla to end up with the prince, that was just never a part of the story. It is just my opinion but I think that Drusilla should fall in love on her own it mae the story more beleiveable and add some real drama to the mix with the whole prince drama thing. Just a suggestion you don't even have to acknowlede it if you alreay have an idea of how the story is going to end up. XD
4/19/2006 c7 earlkgm
Oh! I want to know more! (lol) Please Update soon!
4/19/2006 c7 2The Light of Earendil
Haha, I like Penelope already!

Oh my gosh, Dru's mother is very scary. She wants Dru to KILL herself? And this passage was so cruel: "You’re ugly! You’re pitiful. You have no friends." Meany.

The part where Dru is standing in front of the mirror and then her sisters join her is really well done.

I can't wait for more!
4/19/2006 c6 The Light of Earendil
Aw, poor dear. Nice chapter, once again the letter thing reminds me of Ella Enchanted :)
4/19/2006 c5 The Light of Earendil
Aww, I really like Alex too, and I'll end up loving him like I always do. Great job, keep it up :)
4/13/2006 c4 SkepticCritic
He's only just been introduced and I think he may be my favorite as well...but then again, I always like the male leads...Be they arrogant, cocky, shy, bad, gay, wierd, whatever, I always fall instantly in love with them...That's how you can pick out the true romantics...They instantly fall in love with the guy she'll end up with even if no one else sees it coming...Not that I'm assuming she'll end up with him...He's one of those characters you'd love the heroine to get though...
4/13/2006 c3 SkepticCritic
Ohh...This actually kinda reminds me of the story I'm reading right now...'Confessions of an Ugly Stepsister' by Gregory Maguire...Another Cinderella story...I've read most if not all of them that are to be found...'Ella Enchanted', 'Just Ella', 'Ever After'...I adore them...Just like this one...
4/13/2006 c2 SkepticCritic
Oh...But things rarely turn out the way you expect them to...
4/13/2006 c1 SkepticCritic
Oh...If that isn't one of the most gut wrenching, heart breaking summaries anyone has ever read, I don't know what is...

It certainly keeps you coming back for more for some reason though...
4/10/2006 c4 5aiur
*giggles* ... hi, you! i like alex, to. (bet fp would delete any more "o"s i added to that...) it ... *thinks* ... it's kinda off from what we saw from you last. still funny, but there seems to be a slight lack of quirkiness around druisilla. (& i better have spelled her name right, too, 'cause i'm not checking. too good for that.) haha. i'm still trying to decide if i like that or not. in any case, i am delighted you're back writing, so maybe i don't really caare. things change. *grins* ... other than that, i don't have much to say. twisted fairy tales aren't my thing. meaning i can't write them. haha. i really enjoyed this. just as long as you keep writing & YOU like it. *sticks out tongue* ... a couple of author notes ago, it didn't sound like you did. didn't read that way, either. but ah, well - you can always write it for alexander. *giggles* ... okay. jetting. so wonderful to see you backback!

~kait
4/5/2006 c1 2The Light of Earendil
Oh, I forgot- I meant to ask you how old your characters are right now. I got a little confused because I thought they were younger, but now they act like teenagers... I guess they grew up :) Could you sneak their ages into the story somewhere?

Hehe I love the bit at the end of chapter four where Dru is just extremely perceptive but Xander (sorry, Buffy reference) thinks she cheated and already knew about the lady. Great touch!
4/5/2006 c4 The Light of Earendil
Lovely chapter- the story is really picking up now! I really love the idea of Dru not being pretty, as I mentioned before, because I feel like I and many other people can relate to her feelings. And I was wondering if, perhaps, Drusilla's name was chosen from a certain television show with an insane vampire?

...If you didn't, I'll just say that you should watch Buffy the Vampire Slayer. Best. Show. Ever.
4/4/2006 c4 1Hunter097
This is really interesting. Twisted fairytales are always fun, I can't wait to read more.
4/4/2006 c4 the girl
update or esle i will have to come find you and ripp you slow apart PIECE BY PIECE ... wait to messy, O.O i will ...um HURT YOU
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