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for I'm closing my eyes one last time

12/12/2006 c1 6Chocolate Marshmallow Boi
WOWe. Nice writing you've got there. True enough how experiences make writing a more authentic deal than just words to be read. You breath your words life... although this poem gives you the solid idea of death. Lovely paradox! :) if you have time, read my work: 'Beautiful Words' It isn't angsty or something, but I think it can helpyou. dont forget to review arayt?:P
8/29/2006 c1 4untitled furniture
Wow. I mean WOW. That was sad. I'm a addict at reading poetry! You'll just never see my writing it my self. Hehe. Thanks for reading my story! I really like this poem it's sad...real sad. The words fit so well (That sounds weird, but it's true!).

-Tweetz
5/24/2006 c1 136Elliptical Shapes
A nice sentiment. Was there any reason why you should write it? Or did it just feel necessary?

Good one.

Keep writing

alan
4/6/2006 c1 49Neaera
Omg! So sad! But so very well written! Keep it up huns! You're doin awesome!
3/30/2006 c1 48thePelican
Its simple and straight to the point. It really touched me. This poem. For some reason. It really did touched me. I liked it a lot.

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