for A Seed6/17/2006 c1 
173sunshineofyourlife
wow. so...all of your work is excellen! i can't wait to read more! please update soon! i can't wait!
-Sunshine :D
if you'd like to make any extra comments on my poetry...which i would really appreciate since we seem to be on the same thought track, my e-mail is
173sunshineofyourlifewow. so...all of your work is excellen! i can't wait to read more! please update soon! i can't wait!
-Sunshine :D
if you'd like to make any extra comments on my poetry...which i would really appreciate since we seem to be on the same thought track, my e-mail is
6/17/2006 c1 62Amalia Jagd
i really like this poem. im not too sure about it being a poem though, but i really like it. im not quite sure what the hidden meaning in here is, but i really like it. good job!
62Amalia Jagdi really like this poem. im not too sure about it being a poem though, but i really like it. im not quite sure what the hidden meaning in here is, but i really like it. good job!
5/2/2006 c1 61AuthorNinjaEarth
Sounds like the seed of a wondeful poet. Excellent work!
Feel free to check out my profile for a special link to a Christian group as well as for more Christian works that I've written. Thanks for sharing.
61AuthorNinjaEarthSounds like the seed of a wondeful poet. Excellent work!
Feel free to check out my profile for a special link to a Christian group as well as for more Christian works that I've written. Thanks for sharing.
4/25/2006 c1 7Un Arc En Ciel
I liked this poem. I like the way you used the metaphors.
BTW, thanks for the review (^_^)
7Un Arc En CielI liked this poem. I like the way you used the metaphors.
BTW, thanks for the review (^_^)
4/19/2006 c1 20Pheobe Meryll
I love this. Especially how you said "she'd carry me off to somewhere safe and bury me in the soft sacred soil." Sacred was such a perfect word for it...wow, I love this piece...on my favorites!
20Pheobe MeryllI love this. Especially how you said "she'd carry me off to somewhere safe and bury me in the soft sacred soil." Sacred was such a perfect word for it...wow, I love this piece...on my favorites!
3/31/2006 c1 61Stories-have-souls
That is a truly beautiful Nature poem. Written from the heart. It's got such a loving, tender feel :)
61Stories-have-soulsThat is a truly beautiful Nature poem. Written from the heart. It's got such a loving, tender feel :)