for In Your Truck8/2/2006 c1 
17Sunshine Lust
Wow. This is so comfortable, in a weird sort of way. You can imagine everything that's happening and I can relate to it so much- love old trucks, love riding along. Feels like so much more. Like it's trying to be a story, heh. I love it.
17Sunshine LustWow. This is so comfortable, in a weird sort of way. You can imagine everything that's happening and I can relate to it so much- love old trucks, love riding along. Feels like so much more. Like it's trying to be a story, heh. I love it.
6/13/2006 c1 UJWF0WFW0FWE0WEF0
I like this. The way you describe the feeling in all these words that go straight through and up into a marbly perfect part of the mind where things are felt in a different way but still are the barest things. Sorry if that sounds weird. I just finished a poem and I'm so out of it.
I like this. The way you describe the feeling in all these words that go straight through and up into a marbly perfect part of the mind where things are felt in a different way but still are the barest things. Sorry if that sounds weird. I just finished a poem and I'm so out of it.
4/28/2006 c1 86Isis lives
this is a really great poem. I like the concept that such a simple thing can change so much for you, and that that one thing reminds you of him. I like the way that it is so simple all the way through - it makes it seem like it comes from the heart and keeps it safe from being contrived - especially the way that the ending catches you out. Because it's still in the same simple, laid-back style at first you just read over it and don't really take in what actually happened. It was only on the second reading that I realised quite how harrowing that ending is. *adds to favourites list* :D
Keep writing, as always,
Isis x
86Isis livesthis is a really great poem. I like the concept that such a simple thing can change so much for you, and that that one thing reminds you of him. I like the way that it is so simple all the way through - it makes it seem like it comes from the heart and keeps it safe from being contrived - especially the way that the ending catches you out. Because it's still in the same simple, laid-back style at first you just read over it and don't really take in what actually happened. It was only on the second reading that I realised quite how harrowing that ending is. *adds to favourites list* :D
Keep writing, as always,
Isis x
4/26/2006 c1 593Morwain
this was really cute i like and thanks for the review it one of my favorite things i wrote
593Morwainthis was really cute i like and thanks for the review it one of my favorite things i wrote
4/25/2006 c1 Saleinaenachiyayahoo.com
I love this poem/story its really nice, i love how you discribe the certain things in it, keep writing your really good at it:)
-Saleinaenachiya, thanks for commenting my story:)
I love this poem/story its really nice, i love how you discribe the certain things in it, keep writing your really good at it:)
-Saleinaenachiya, thanks for commenting my story:)
4/19/2006 c1 3SarahElmore4515
Nice story/poem thingy...I liked it. Thanks for reviewing my poem thingy, too!
3SarahElmore4515Nice story/poem thingy...I liked it. Thanks for reviewing my poem thingy, too!
4/17/2006 c1 review
i like poems that turn ordinary things into simpler things. and make it seem more deep.glad to hear you liked my poem ^_^ hey you got an sn on aim or something?
i like poems that turn ordinary things into simpler things. and make it seem more deep.glad to hear you liked my poem ^_^ hey you got an sn on aim or something?
4/4/2006 c1 17C. Fitzsimmons
Lovely little poem. I like the mood and the descriptions are nicely written.
17C. FitzsimmonsLovely little poem. I like the mood and the descriptions are nicely written.