for Say Goodnight7/23/2007 c1 
4S. E. K. Arouet
You did a very good job of switching between past and present. The story really flowed. The only part that felt awkward was the last sentence about the bear. I was a little confused about whether it was literally there or whether she had imagined it.
4S. E. K. ArouetYou did a very good job of switching between past and present. The story really flowed. The only part that felt awkward was the last sentence about the bear. I was a little confused about whether it was literally there or whether she had imagined it.
4/1/2006 c1 2WhenWillLifeEverBeFun
Amazing! this is one of the best fics I've ever read. Nice job! Keep writtin'!
2WhenWillLifeEverBeFunAmazing! this is one of the best fics I've ever read. Nice job! Keep writtin'!