
4/11/2006 c1
306Ashelin
Beautiful, I can really relate to this poem. I love how it gives the picture of silence screaming throughout all the noise. I too welcome the silence, just ponder and listen to God. That is why I love the night so much. Oh dear, now I'm rambling. Well, great poem anyway, good job!

Beautiful, I can really relate to this poem. I love how it gives the picture of silence screaming throughout all the noise. I too welcome the silence, just ponder and listen to God. That is why I love the night so much. Oh dear, now I'm rambling. Well, great poem anyway, good job!
3/31/2006 c1
21angeloftheninthorder
Thus shall scattered thoughts be woven into bittersweet song. The rhyming adds rythm to its purpose and enhances the poem.

Thus shall scattered thoughts be woven into bittersweet song. The rhyming adds rythm to its purpose and enhances the poem.