4/2/2006 c1 63silentscreamer07
AH! I loved this! i think i fell in love with the poem...I LOVEDthe lines...

"I detest that cruel rule of time/that holds me to lose perfect rhyme/Please give me wings, so the wing I affect."

AH! I loved that! Anything to do with wings, i absolutely love! i don't know what it is about it, but i just like the whole peaceful image of wings, i guess..idk..ne ways..

Anyway, enuff of that..on with the review about you're poem...

I liked alot of you're questions, some of them I've thought about...sort of...and some I never really gave any attention to...anyways...it was...*mind-moving* haha and i really liked it..*kw* and hope to see more of you're stuff posted! this rox my sox!

~Britney~

btw...thnx for the review! ahh! lol it made my day! Dr Pepper rules! haha

3/31/2006 c1 Nateateit
Excellent! Some very deep rooted questions raised- and even more disturbingly left unanswered.

Author shows high command of the literal and the figurative. Some home truths revealed that only contribute to the philosophical scalple that is this stunning piece.

Possibly too gloomy for some, but well enjoyed.