for Simplicity7/25/2006 c1 
65SarahJaneDrkAngl05
aw that is so sweet! i absolutly love it! that would be a great poem for a wedding! my bf and i are talking about getting married and if we do i may use your poem to read to him if thats fine with you of course. great job!
~SarahJane
65SarahJaneDrkAngl05aw that is so sweet! i absolutly love it! that would be a great poem for a wedding! my bf and i are talking about getting married and if we do i may use your poem to read to him if thats fine with you of course. great job!
~SarahJane
4/25/2006 c1 40Ice Dagger
That's beautiful! I adore your simple rhyme scheme, since it goes with your simple theme, and the way you capture so much emotion while making it look so easy. I really love your writing style, and I hope you keep writing!
40Ice DaggerThat's beautiful! I adore your simple rhyme scheme, since it goes with your simple theme, and the way you capture so much emotion while making it look so easy. I really love your writing style, and I hope you keep writing!
4/7/2006 c1 Blank1379
People like that are wonderful, aren't they? I'm fortunate enough to have some friends who are like that.It also rhymes. :) It's nice to read something that rhymes that doesn't sound like it was forced to rhyme. (If you've ever read anything written by a five-year-old poet, you know what I mean.) :)Great job, mellon nin. Keep it up.-Smeagol Fasir Kenobi
People like that are wonderful, aren't they? I'm fortunate enough to have some friends who are like that.It also rhymes. :) It's nice to read something that rhymes that doesn't sound like it was forced to rhyme. (If you've ever read anything written by a five-year-old poet, you know what I mean.) :)Great job, mellon nin. Keep it up.-Smeagol Fasir Kenobi
3/31/2006 c1 1KyuubiANBU
it's amazing where love takes us sometimes, where it moves us sometimes. great poem, excelently written.
1KyuubiANBUit's amazing where love takes us sometimes, where it moves us sometimes. great poem, excelently written.