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5/20/2005 c1 3Blue Flamed Phoenix
This is a really good start alough I would of preffed the bird to be a diffrent species like a hawk or some thing of the sorts. You need to watch your grammar other than that it's great! Keep writing!

Snowfeather
8/8/2002 c1 Ashur
This is pretty interesting.Please Continue ^_^
3/6/2001 c1 2Michelle
If you keep up like that I WON'T give you the backstage passes :P remember, if I win them, they're MINE to give to ANYONE who is NICE to me...

~The REAL Michelle
3/5/2001 c1 Michelle
wow can you write! you are my best friend! i will give you my backstage passes when i get them...just because you are my friend! wow! thats really good Syria!
2/26/2001 c1 Maha
Cool! I love the ending! Finish it soon!
2/22/2001 c1 4Elene
Intriguing start, uh, ohly problem I find: "They would also draw some blood to test its DNA and blood type, also telling if it is a male or female." Remember how "you" and other scientists have already decided on what genes to put in the bird? Well, then why would they want to check the DNA and the blood type and the gender after it is born? - Elene
2/22/2001 c1 12Syria
should i finish it? what do u think? i think i should but i donno...hummmmm well tell me in a review!

~syria

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