for Incredulity3/31/2007 c1 
174a silenced revolution
Beautiful and unique poem! Leaves some elements to the reader's imagination. Great work, kudos :)
174a silenced revolutionBeautiful and unique poem! Leaves some elements to the reader's imagination. Great work, kudos :)
6/12/2006 c1 24eyes of sky
yes, that's exactly what i often think, do not these people all have mothers? you hit the nail on the head...to use a strange metaphor
24eyes of skyyes, that's exactly what i often think, do not these people all have mothers? you hit the nail on the head...to use a strange metaphor
4/13/2006 c1 59Frore
Actually, I really like this. It's beautiful in it's simplicity, no wading through excess frills in order to take something that moves you. Very, very nice work. =)
59FroreActually, I really like this. It's beautiful in it's simplicity, no wading through excess frills in order to take something that moves you. Very, very nice work. =)
4/1/2006 c1 4Easter Morning Star
As a mother with a son of my own this one really touched home. Good job, I feel the same all too often. Nice poem. I really enjoyed reading it.
4Easter Morning StarAs a mother with a son of my own this one really touched home. Good job, I feel the same all too often. Nice poem. I really enjoyed reading it.