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10/31/2013 c2 DawnSister
Ooh, twins. I like the interaction between Derek and Nick, there was a lot of dialogue in this chapter but it didn't seem over the top. It would be nice to know what their "looks" are though, since there was talk of them sharing the same looks, but no description. Reading back over the chapter though it would be a push to fit any description in without it seeming staged. The whole thing read very smoothly without any kind of hint about what they look like. I'm hoping there will be something in the next chapter since I am assuming this will be the "Nick dresses up Derek" scene and "Derek gets a shock because he is actually quite hot".
Looking forward to it.
DS
PS. Why does this story only have 16 reviews? Sometimes the mind boggles.
Ooh, twins. I like the interaction between Derek and Nick, there was a lot of dialogue in this chapter but it didn't seem over the top. It would be nice to know what their "looks" are though, since there was talk of them sharing the same looks, but no description. Reading back over the chapter though it would be a push to fit any description in without it seeming staged. The whole thing read very smoothly without any kind of hint about what they look like. I'm hoping there will be something in the next chapter since I am assuming this will be the "Nick dresses up Derek" scene and "Derek gets a shock because he is actually quite hot".
Looking forward to it.
DS
PS. Why does this story only have 16 reviews? Sometimes the mind boggles.
10/31/2013 c1 DawnSister
Ooh, I like the beginning of this very much. It is intriguing and has left us with questions that need to be answered, mainly whether Derek will meet this mystery Strife.
Great start, looking forward to the rest.
DS
Ooh, I like the beginning of this very much. It is intriguing and has left us with questions that need to be answered, mainly whether Derek will meet this mystery Strife.
Great start, looking forward to the rest.
DS
6/11/2013 c1 res
I liked it and would like more. The beginning hits you like a glass vase in the face. But I like it.
I liked it and would like more. The beginning hits you like a glass vase in the face. But I like it.
11/9/2007 c1 HarderToBreathe
PLEASE! PLEASE! update son it has been 5 months already since you had last updated this VERY ENTERTAINING story!
i really like this story of yours. the suspense of what will happen is GETTING to me it's a pain becoz there's a possibility that my request wont be granted.
please do update again! i would be ecstatic if you would.
PLEASE! PLEASE! update son it has been 5 months already since you had last updated this VERY ENTERTAINING story!
i really like this story of yours. the suspense of what will happen is GETTING to me it's a pain becoz there's a possibility that my request wont be granted.
please do update again! i would be ecstatic if you would.
4/9/2006 c3 
4wickedzl
One word: WONDERFUL
More please, and longer chapter? =x
Wow this was great. Nice story line its gotten me hooked and hopefully you'll continue it soon enough and not wait for another month of so. Hope to see this story around!
ZL
4wickedzlOne word: WONDERFUL
More please, and longer chapter? =x
Wow this was great. Nice story line its gotten me hooked and hopefully you'll continue it soon enough and not wait for another month of so. Hope to see this story around!
ZL
4/4/2006 c3 16Collar de Espinas
Oh...
Well, you've certainly got my attention with this fic.
I really like Nick- he brightened up the second chapter a hell of a lot and I loved the interaction between him and Derek.
And I'm definitely intrigued by the thought of Strife returning. There's definitely an agenda to that...isn't there?
Well, I'm looking forward to the next update (hopefully soon?)
16Collar de EspinasOh...
Well, you've certainly got my attention with this fic.
I really like Nick- he brightened up the second chapter a hell of a lot and I loved the interaction between him and Derek.
And I'm definitely intrigued by the thought of Strife returning. There's definitely an agenda to that...isn't there?
Well, I'm looking forward to the next update (hopefully soon?)
4/4/2006 c3 25Esquirella
Whoa! That was a shock from the past, wasn't it? No wonder the guy wouldn't leave him alone in the library!
25EsquirellaWhoa! That was a shock from the past, wasn't it? No wonder the guy wouldn't leave him alone in the library!
4/4/2006 c3 7Sunshine Bear
Why would he be back. He is a famous rock star and he is there to eat your first baby.
7Sunshine BearWhy would he be back. He is a famous rock star and he is there to eat your first baby.
4/3/2006 c2 5American Schokolade
So, Derek's a gay nerdy football player? Whoa... Nick is pretty funny. I wonder if they're going to meet up with Strife at the club... But if they do, poor Strife because that means that Derek totally didn't call him...
Can't wait for more!
5American SchokoladeSo, Derek's a gay nerdy football player? Whoa... Nick is pretty funny. I wonder if they're going to meet up with Strife at the club... But if they do, poor Strife because that means that Derek totally didn't call him...
Can't wait for more!
4/3/2006 c2 56Porn Yesterday
I like Nick.
Heh, he brightened up the chapter OH SO easily... but that could just be me, I don't know.
This chapter was amusing though - I like the relationship dynamic between both Nick and Derek.
I also enjoy your writing style at the same time, it seems very relaxed and almost... sure of itself, very defined and well done as of yet.
The dialogue was humourous, a few chuckles here and there from me.
Only constructive criticism I'd have (if you can call it that) is the fact, I wish your chapters were longer.
That's just the greedy bastard / bitch in me though - don't mind me, ne?
Good start, eagerly await for the next chapter.
^_^
Status: Impatiently waiting.
Your Friendly Neighbourhood Dead Bisexual
Look, it's a dead body...!
It's a girl...
Let's poke her boobs!
Morbid, am I not?
56Porn YesterdayI like Nick.
Heh, he brightened up the chapter OH SO easily... but that could just be me, I don't know.
This chapter was amusing though - I like the relationship dynamic between both Nick and Derek.
I also enjoy your writing style at the same time, it seems very relaxed and almost... sure of itself, very defined and well done as of yet.
The dialogue was humourous, a few chuckles here and there from me.
Only constructive criticism I'd have (if you can call it that) is the fact, I wish your chapters were longer.
That's just the greedy bastard / bitch in me though - don't mind me, ne?
Good start, eagerly await for the next chapter.
^_^
Status: Impatiently waiting.
Your Friendly Neighbourhood Dead Bisexual
Look, it's a dead body...!
It's a girl...
Let's poke her boobs!
Morbid, am I not?