for Mountain4/24/2006 c1 
27GC Age
Kayla...um...yikes...you just freaked me out...um...I reviewed this before it makes much more sense now...I really hope I am mis-reading the signs but yikes... well I can only hope that you get better and continue to write...:((sign that someone is really freaked out: using alot of ... lol luaghter the best medacine)
27GC AgeKayla...um...yikes...you just freaked me out...um...I reviewed this before it makes much more sense now...I really hope I am mis-reading the signs but yikes... well I can only hope that you get better and continue to write...:((sign that someone is really freaked out: using alot of ... lol luaghter the best medacine)
4/13/2006 c1 9dragonfire-lina144
I love this poem! Just-flat out LOVE it.
The hymn-like tone of it really drew me in, and I can imagine someone saying this on their last day on Earth, assuring their loved ones that they will be alright...This is just...wow.
9dragonfire-lina144I love this poem! Just-flat out LOVE it.
The hymn-like tone of it really drew me in, and I can imagine someone saying this on their last day on Earth, assuring their loved ones that they will be alright...This is just...wow.
4/2/2006 c1 11Chemically Induced
a nice spiritual work of writing. i loves the axtended metaphor, mountain. and how sometimes the speaker was a mountain and at pther times, was "mountain." i'm not a religious person, but even to me it was uplifting. well done. :)
love, c.induced.
11Chemically Induceda nice spiritual work of writing. i loves the axtended metaphor, mountain. and how sometimes the speaker was a mountain and at pther times, was "mountain." i'm not a religious person, but even to me it was uplifting. well done. :)
love, c.induced.
4/1/2006 c1 34Smoky Bear
very poignant, heartfelt and beautifully written. it's a moving poem... very sorry for all involved.
34Smoky Bearvery poignant, heartfelt and beautifully written. it's a moving poem... very sorry for all involved.