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12/21/2001 c1 Matthew Mathay
Good story, but you need to get your facts right. Jupiter is a gas giant, it does not have a solid surface and it's gravity is thousands of times stronger than Earth's.

Other than that, it's a good story.
3/9/2001 c1 345134543534521342134
Hoo Rah. Go grandpa! Good fic, origional background. I think the beginning's too sudden though...perhaps meld in the history with the story further?

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