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4/4/2006 c1 19Lulu2606
Gd but I prefer ure other ones...this one seems cliched at points. Gd tho
4/3/2006 c1 50Kristina Suko
That does make sense, and it's good. It's a bit choppy, but just because it's more sentences than poetry-ish stuff, if you know what I mean. It's poetry, but it's not supposed to rhyme or have a rhythm, really. Anyways. I like the second verse the best.

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