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4/4/2006 c1 19Lulu2606
Woohoo! Rhyme scheme! Kinda short but i like it, the 2 2 3 1 stanzas. Interesting
4/4/2006 c1 3shuushuu
wow

dude i didnt no u wrote poems...

your more of a science girl!

like one of your other reviewers in dont have a clue wat its about seeing as im clueless wen it comes to english skills but i still likes it. especailly "Forever where landStruck by demons". that line is so cool! u never told me that u stuff on here. aint u glad that we told u about fictionpress? well technically i found it first and told lulaR bout it - she thought it was lame first and now shes addicted! LOL!

anyways girlie liked the lickle poem hope u right more.

DDF X
4/3/2006 c1 7Just Broken Shards
Hm, interesting...I like it. Very strong words and phrasing. I like how you mix rhyme with a little free style. Very cool.
4/3/2006 c1 50Kristina Suko
It's... interesting. What it is about, exactly, is lost to me, but it's interesting to read.

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