for Gifts of Magic4/4/2006 c1 
16Islandbreeze
I like the tone of this beginning, and the premise of the story sounds interesting and like it could have a lot of places to go. The purple-eye distinction is neat, and you leave off at a good spot to make me want to read more. Nice story...I'm definitely interested in reading more :)
16IslandbreezeI like the tone of this beginning, and the premise of the story sounds interesting and like it could have a lot of places to go. The purple-eye distinction is neat, and you leave off at a good spot to make me want to read more. Nice story...I'm definitely interested in reading more :)