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4/4/2006 c1 97Farran
Let me start by saying yes everyone undergose a time like this and in my opinion the worse thing you can do is sit down and write about it, it just feels so forced so wrong. The title descusted me and I was prepared to come into this poem and just click stgreight back off cause I dont like being too nasty. However I got somthing completly diffrent from it but somhow it worked. Completly opposite to your opinion the unresolved and slightly generic style of the poem is what makes it work.
4/4/2006 c1 19Lulu2606
Ok this poems quite creepy. The whole unfinished feeling leaves a tension, and the repetition of fear and capitalisation of Winter and Summer...

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