for The Spider and the Fly8/27/2013 c1 
27absentmindedprofessor
Short and sweet, but it packs a punch. There were some parts in there I particularly liked - the delicate gossamer-winged fly part, especially. Excuse my incoherence, but I really did like this piece. The spider and the fly are demonstrated in a more emotionally charged dance here - for example, when the spider occasionally makes obvious his true self in a cool smile. Great work! *favourites*
27absentmindedprofessorShort and sweet, but it packs a punch. There were some parts in there I particularly liked - the delicate gossamer-winged fly part, especially. Excuse my incoherence, but I really did like this piece. The spider and the fly are demonstrated in a more emotionally charged dance here - for example, when the spider occasionally makes obvious his true self in a cool smile. Great work! *favourites*
10/4/2008 c1 15IlovetheCoreys
Wow. This piece reminds me of the character Rick Murray in the TV show "Degrassi: the Next Generation". Very brilliant and creative!
Keep up your awesome writing!
15IlovetheCoreysWow. This piece reminds me of the character Rick Murray in the TV show "Degrassi: the Next Generation". Very brilliant and creative!
Keep up your awesome writing!
7/23/2006 c1 11Akana Akazen
Wow... Creepily enough, this is a lot like a story idea I had late yesterday, even the kiss part. Of course, I came on here for the purpose of finding something similar and comparing/contrasting, so I guess I found what I was looking for.
Anyway, this is wonderfully done. It's short and straight to the point, perfectly metaphorical as intended.
11Akana AkazenWow... Creepily enough, this is a lot like a story idea I had late yesterday, even the kiss part. Of course, I came on here for the purpose of finding something similar and comparing/contrasting, so I guess I found what I was looking for.
Anyway, this is wonderfully done. It's short and straight to the point, perfectly metaphorical as intended.
4/24/2006 c1 Sweet Roisin Dubh
That was great! You know, you could really elaborate on this idea and turn it into a longer story...just a thought.
That was great! You know, you could really elaborate on this idea and turn it into a longer story...just a thought.
4/16/2006 c1 18lulujynxgemini
wow... that was good, sad, but good. it kinda hit home for me... i know a guy that's like a spider, in the way you've described this person. he's kind and gentle and lures people in, makes them lov ehim, then hurts them, hurts them bad...
anyways... this was good
18lulujynxgeminiwow... that was good, sad, but good. it kinda hit home for me... i know a guy that's like a spider, in the way you've described this person. he's kind and gentle and lures people in, makes them lov ehim, then hurts them, hurts them bad...
anyways... this was good