for My Sanctuary4/6/2006 c1 
71Cawfee
second stanza was ment to say land instead of stand . got messed up typing it up
71Cawfeesecond stanza was ment to say land instead of stand . got messed up typing it up
4/6/2006 c1 144chaos called creation
Explosive ending. Me like :) I think you need to work on the rhyming in the second stanza to polish it up a bit but besides that... this was well written.
144chaos called creationExplosive ending. Me like :) I think you need to work on the rhyming in the second stanza to polish it up a bit but besides that... this was well written.
4/6/2006 c1 1k+Faithless Juliet
She walks light,the way my dreams told me she would.I hold her tight,the way my dreams said I could.
I love the mood that (that) and this whole poem creates; it's so tender and abstractly simple. I was mesmerized by your style, I really enjoyed, keep up the good work.
Much love,Juliet.
1k+Faithless JulietShe walks light,the way my dreams told me she would.I hold her tight,the way my dreams said I could.
I love the mood that (that) and this whole poem creates; it's so tender and abstractly simple. I was mesmerized by your style, I really enjoyed, keep up the good work.
Much love,Juliet.