for City of Lights7/21/2006 c1 
69this is britt
i wish i could write like this- that's all I can say. the words you use are so perfect.
69this is britti wish i could write like this- that's all I can say. the words you use are so perfect.
5/4/2006 c1 211avani.awakening
I went to London. It wasn't that great either.
Actually it's refreshing to see someone else on here who isn't all "I bleed/the razor gleams" or "you don't know who I am/ you bully me but you don't know what I'm like inside" etc. etc., even though I don't always know what your point is.
211avani.awakeningI went to London. It wasn't that great either.
Actually it's refreshing to see someone else on here who isn't all "I bleed/the razor gleams" or "you don't know who I am/ you bully me but you don't know what I'm like inside" etc. etc., even though I don't always know what your point is.
4/8/2006 c1 59Frore
Wow, amazing.I think the theme of this poem in itself is original, and all of your words just flow together. Obviously, that's what poetry is meant to do, but you see so many works that are disjointed and unflattering nowadays! Not the case with this one. =) Keep writing!
59FroreWow, amazing.I think the theme of this poem in itself is original, and all of your words just flow together. Obviously, that's what poetry is meant to do, but you see so many works that are disjointed and unflattering nowadays! Not the case with this one. =) Keep writing!
4/8/2006 c1 3this young lady
wow.this is so true to life.I've never heard anyone before saying Paris is the capital of poets,but I don't believe it either.i like the line,"drink&vomit bile-tainted,shuddering night in heaving gulps" so dark and gorgeous.i think i will put this on my favourites.
and by the way,thankyou so much for reviewing my poetry,i'm sorry i haven't reviewed yours much recently.
3this young ladywow.this is so true to life.I've never heard anyone before saying Paris is the capital of poets,but I don't believe it either.i like the line,"drink&vomit bile-tainted,shuddering night in heaving gulps" so dark and gorgeous.i think i will put this on my favourites.
and by the way,thankyou so much for reviewing my poetry,i'm sorry i haven't reviewed yours much recently.
4/7/2006 c1 19Jason J. Ross
Wow! Very descriptive! Great vocabulary! It has a rebellious, audacious tone. I never thought of Paris as the "capitol of poets" before; you made me think. Thank you.
19Jason J. RossWow! Very descriptive! Great vocabulary! It has a rebellious, audacious tone. I never thought of Paris as the "capitol of poets" before; you made me think. Thank you.
4/7/2006 c1 12Lisa Parry
I was reminded of Blake's poem 'London' - which is a good thing as your poem and his make observational political comments on the cities.
Your poem was effective in its distortion of the accepted idea of Paris. I liked the way it starts 'They say Paris is the capital of poets' using this as a basis for your argument. A good poem :)
12Lisa ParryI was reminded of Blake's poem 'London' - which is a good thing as your poem and his make observational political comments on the cities.
Your poem was effective in its distortion of the accepted idea of Paris. I liked the way it starts 'They say Paris is the capital of poets' using this as a basis for your argument. A good poem :)