4/7/2006 c1 light flower
wow. such a strong image! your words really pulled your reader into the poem. that takes skill! nice job.

4/7/2006 c1 27OceanFreedom
wow i love that, not all haikus work but this one is really powerful, keep writing :-)

much luv noddy (charlene)

maybe you would like to check out my new poem it is called moonlight release.