
1/25/2014 c23 lord syyn
Well, a very good start to the story. It pulls on all thee right strings, and the morbidity (without being vampire related) is also a nice touch. Sucks that she left for canada, but im sure R will find a way to get there. Have a cookie, or a banana. I dont know which you prefer.
Well, a very good start to the story. It pulls on all thee right strings, and the morbidity (without being vampire related) is also a nice touch. Sucks that she left for canada, but im sure R will find a way to get there. Have a cookie, or a banana. I dont know which you prefer.
6/9/2007 c15 Lauren
Hey, I havent finished reading this story but what I have read so far is rlly good... There's just one thing tho... in the backround info for ch. 15 u said that josie and reilly live in ontario but at another point u said josie's brother is in cegep and they dont have cegep in ontario.. anyways just thought I'd point that out ttyl bye
Hey, I havent finished reading this story but what I have read so far is rlly good... There's just one thing tho... in the backround info for ch. 15 u said that josie and reilly live in ontario but at another point u said josie's brother is in cegep and they dont have cegep in ontario.. anyways just thought I'd point that out ttyl bye
8/7/2006 c23 justaghost
I just sat here and read the whole story (I do that alot) and it really good. Some parts could be edited, which you're probably aware of, but otherwise it was good. Honestly though, I had to laugh when Jake thought Reilly had killed Josie. Great story, well done.
I just sat here and read the whole story (I do that alot) and it really good. Some parts could be edited, which you're probably aware of, but otherwise it was good. Honestly though, I had to laugh when Jake thought Reilly had killed Josie. Great story, well done.
7/31/2006 c23
4Serenity the forgotten
Grace I love your story. It's AMAZING, I swear I almost cried reading Josie's letter. Anyways congrats on this story and good luck with your other stories.
xox Emmy xox

Grace I love your story. It's AMAZING, I swear I almost cried reading Josie's letter. Anyways congrats on this story and good luck with your other stories.
xox Emmy xox
7/17/2006 c21
3PaiselyAvenger
Yay! Things are going better! or are they? :) Like what you're doing with Kristy and Jake. Not at all expecting that. Keep it up! And update soon. Now, preferably. yes. now.

Yay! Things are going better! or are they? :) Like what you're doing with Kristy and Jake. Not at all expecting that. Keep it up! And update soon. Now, preferably. yes. now.
7/10/2006 c23 Sam
Wow...i just read this whole story and it's absolutely amazing! You're such a great writer. You have so much talent! All I can say is keep writing!:)
Wow...i just read this whole story and it's absolutely amazing! You're such a great writer. You have so much talent! All I can say is keep writing!:)
7/4/2006 c23
9pull-the-trigger
OH MY GOD! WOW! I loved the ending, it was awesome! Swet, you rock dudette...I'm a little hyper right now so don't mind me. ^.^

OH MY GOD! WOW! I loved the ending, it was awesome! Swet, you rock dudette...I'm a little hyper right now so don't mind me. ^.^
7/4/2006 c22 somuchformyhappyending
ooh! You updated SIS! This is bex17, by the way, just on the other penname of mine. This was really good! Update soon!
ooh! You updated SIS! This is bex17, by the way, just on the other penname of mine. This was really good! Update soon!
7/4/2006 c17 DiddlingFiddles
just letting you know..
when someone opens their eyes and they're in a coma
it's normal.
people can open their eyes but their pupils won't dilate and etc.
just letting you know..
when someone opens their eyes and they're in a coma
it's normal.
people can open their eyes but their pupils won't dilate and etc.
7/4/2006 c23
6Callisto Jean
Oh yey! You're done, you're done, you're done!
OMG! Josh died! He's a psychopathic maniac!

Oh yey! You're done, you're done, you're done!
OMG! Josh died! He's a psychopathic maniac!
6/2/2006 c21 kla bee
i love gracie, yes i do!i love gracie, how bout you?
like, omigod! ur stories are so awsum to the ninth gazillionth power!like wow! ur like totally my idol! anyways so yeah, keep writting AH MAZING STORIES DARLING! tty soon
i love gracie, yes i do!i love gracie, how bout you?
like, omigod! ur stories are so awsum to the ninth gazillionth power!like wow! ur like totally my idol! anyways so yeah, keep writting AH MAZING STORIES DARLING! tty soon
6/2/2006 c21 kla bee
i love gracie, yes i do!i love gracie, how bout you?
like, omigod! ur stories are so awsum to the ninth gazillionth power!like wow! ur like totally my idol! anyways so yeah, keep writting AH MAZING STORIES DARLING! tty soon
i love gracie, yes i do!i love gracie, how bout you?
like, omigod! ur stories are so awsum to the ninth gazillionth power!like wow! ur like totally my idol! anyways so yeah, keep writting AH MAZING STORIES DARLING! tty soon
6/2/2006 c21 Jay-Enna
OMIGOSH POOPIE! I love your story!Does Josie die? does Reilley die?TELL ME HURY UP OR I WILL PEE IN MY PANTS...okay maybe not but...yah!
OMIGOSH POOPIE! I love your story!Does Josie die? does Reilley die?TELL ME HURY UP OR I WILL PEE IN MY PANTS...okay maybe not but...yah!