for Stone Lord4/15/2006 c1 
2CrimZeo
very nice. a stroy is crafted as an outrlet of its writer, dont be scared if its choppy. heres something i dint understand though. why did henuki put a sword on his grave even though he wasnt dead? also, it would be cool if henuki's hate consumes him into becoming a dark elf
2CrimZeovery nice. a stroy is crafted as an outrlet of its writer, dont be scared if its choppy. heres something i dint understand though. why did henuki put a sword on his grave even though he wasnt dead? also, it would be cool if henuki's hate consumes him into becoming a dark elf
4/10/2006 c1 3Dara-void
._. Mah..thank you thank you thank you...Tis god. I like how it ended. He won in the end!...sort of...Anywho. .-. A story of this would work out VERY well...
3Dara-void._. Mah..thank you thank you thank you...Tis god. I like how it ended. He won in the end!...sort of...Anywho. .-. A story of this would work out VERY well...
4/10/2006 c1 5Zane Richardson Waya Wolf
I really liked this, I was able to visualize every bit of it and enjoyed it. You've also done a great job by being very unique in your story line and character development. It wasn't just some cliché elf/human/dwarf fantasy, you've reminded us that not every character has a happily ever after ending or dramatic downfall, but that some of them simply fade away...Keep up the good work, I'll be sure to drop by and read more ^_^
5Zane Richardson Waya WolfI really liked this, I was able to visualize every bit of it and enjoyed it. You've also done a great job by being very unique in your story line and character development. It wasn't just some cliché elf/human/dwarf fantasy, you've reminded us that not every character has a happily ever after ending or dramatic downfall, but that some of them simply fade away...Keep up the good work, I'll be sure to drop by and read more ^_^
4/10/2006 c1 5Kaggr
XO YOU KILLED HIM! T.T Just when I was starting to like him. Aww. I think that should you want to persue it, you could turn this into a very lengthy novel...should you want to of course...-.- You took down Lugonzbi Stone and Ring of Elilidan. I hate you. YOU NEVER FINISHED RING OF ELILIDAN! And if you don't finish it soon, I shall keel you. 3 Very good, a little choppy...and I think there are some things you could...get into more. What those things are, I jsut totally forgot, but...yeah.
5KaggrXO YOU KILLED HIM! T.T Just when I was starting to like him. Aww. I think that should you want to persue it, you could turn this into a very lengthy novel...should you want to of course...-.- You took down Lugonzbi Stone and Ring of Elilidan. I hate you. YOU NEVER FINISHED RING OF ELILIDAN! And if you don't finish it soon, I shall keel you. 3 Very good, a little choppy...and I think there are some things you could...get into more. What those things are, I jsut totally forgot, but...yeah.
4/10/2006 c1 vue
Hm...Quite intersting, especially at the beginning when Henuki found out that his parents were murdered by humans. Realization that he himself was an elf was a plus for me. However, this covers too long a period to put into just one short story, and so it was a little hard to follow and visualize.
Hm...Quite intersting, especially at the beginning when Henuki found out that his parents were murdered by humans. Realization that he himself was an elf was a plus for me. However, this covers too long a period to put into just one short story, and so it was a little hard to follow and visualize.
4/10/2006 c1 Rin
:( Henuki died...But who was the girl, and the boy?
But excellent story ^_^ -gives thinking cap- o.o for keeps.
:( Henuki died...But who was the girl, and the boy?
But excellent story ^_^ -gives thinking cap- o.o for keeps.
4/10/2006 c1 11Swiftstriker
Certainly was interesting. But I couldn't follow what was going on very easily.
11SwiftstrikerCertainly was interesting. But I couldn't follow what was going on very easily.