for Blue Moons5/31/2006 c1 
39Nekomaru
Bloody $^&* that's alot of swearing. Cool it down a bit, okay? Anyway, I only wonder if Dante is a girl or a boy. I mean, it seems like this is a girl but the name is usually a boy. And for such a girl, she surely has a mouth on her. Well, all I can say is... um... Don't be straight forward and at the same time, don't stall. Jeez, I forgot what else. *Shrugs* Oh well.
39NekomaruBloody $^&* that's alot of swearing. Cool it down a bit, okay? Anyway, I only wonder if Dante is a girl or a boy. I mean, it seems like this is a girl but the name is usually a boy. And for such a girl, she surely has a mouth on her. Well, all I can say is... um... Don't be straight forward and at the same time, don't stall. Jeez, I forgot what else. *Shrugs* Oh well.
4/11/2006 c1 1zombiedog001
I like it. And considering I'm a twin myself, this story is really interesting.
1zombiedog001I like it. And considering I'm a twin myself, this story is really interesting.
4/10/2006 c2 litrouke
It's still rough- there are quite a few grammatical errors and such, and the story moves a little too quickly, but the idea behind it sounds cool. Flesh the story out a bit, maybe, and update soon. =)
It's still rough- there are quite a few grammatical errors and such, and the story moves a little too quickly, but the idea behind it sounds cool. Flesh the story out a bit, maybe, and update soon. =)