Reviews: Two Halves For A Sister

5/24/2006 c1 Christy
SO SORRY PWIA I havent checked out your stuff in ages!This poem is FANTASTIC THOUGH."Sweetly sleep sad sister"*points* favourite line!

4/23/2006 c1

55tranCendenZ
Good poem. With a few poetry jams or classes you could polish your work up very nicely. Kudos :D

4/11/2006 c1

72Iris Early
Very sad. Beautiful rhymes. Especially the first four lines.

4/11/2006 c1

29Scrunchy
This is beautiful poetry, with so much pain behind it. *hugs*x

4/10/2006 c1

30Sugar-Craze
Wow... I can see the pain you portray in this poem.. very well written.

God bless,sugarcraze