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5/13/2007 c1 19Ladywilde
You did a really nice job with this...very much like the orginal and yet, there is def. your own take on it. Which makes it really intresting and cool.
4/12/2006 c1 5Lil Firecracker
Hmm, looks like I'm going to have to read "Resume" now. ;) I can tell how much fun you had by the last two lines, it certainly gave me a laugh. Anyways, just a thought from a possibly insane stranger who thanks you for your review; Maybe 'some pills' would work better than 'the pills'. Unless you had specific pills in mind, of course. Yeah... I always /try/ and find some sort of suggestion. .; Haha, I loved the poem, and I'm off to read "Resume" now. :)

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