for Porcelain Heart7/3/2007 c1 
30Charmed.imsure-Always
I forgot how amazing you were at ending your poems! Every word had a sincere expression and I loved it. Porcelain was he perfect fragile metaphor. Very well done.
30Charmed.imsure-AlwaysI forgot how amazing you were at ending your poems! Every word had a sincere expression and I loved it. Porcelain was he perfect fragile metaphor. Very well done.
2/2/2007 c1 26lucretiabaine
This is a beautiful poem. It's so sad and cuts really deep, yet there's a kind of sweetness.
LXF
26lucretiabaineThis is a beautiful poem. It's so sad and cuts really deep, yet there's a kind of sweetness.
LXF
1/6/2007 c1 73Rozlin
Sometimes, you really have a way of paralleling your writing to shit happening with me... i think that may be why i've always liked it so much...
73RozlinSometimes, you really have a way of paralleling your writing to shit happening with me... i think that may be why i've always liked it so much...
5/24/2006 c1 6Not Called Rose
Very nice. Touching, and very moving. I like the idea of a porcelain heart, and this is very well done. Thank you.
6Not Called RoseVery nice. Touching, and very moving. I like the idea of a porcelain heart, and this is very well done. Thank you.
5/17/2006 c1 42Emmytastic gal
heyy... wow awesome work! I love it. the complexity yet simplicity of it all. Beautifully worded. Perfect ending.
Write on,-Em
42Emmytastic galheyy... wow awesome work! I love it. the complexity yet simplicity of it all. Beautifully worded. Perfect ending.
Write on,-Em
5/13/2006 c1 16Amethyst Eyed Cynical One
i love it! great writing as usual! i love the guarding the secrest bit.
16Amethyst Eyed Cynical Onei love it! great writing as usual! i love the guarding the secrest bit.
5/9/2006 c1 Ahemait
wow, this is beautiful. it sounds, to me, like a poem after a breakup. sorry if i'm takign this wrong. but if i'm right, i like the way you wrote it. mournful and beautiful, unlike most of the soppy breakup poems. i especially loved theses lines 'Mending the cracks and fixing the deep gashes,guarding the secrets that were her nightmare flashes' and the ending. great poem
wow, this is beautiful. it sounds, to me, like a poem after a breakup. sorry if i'm takign this wrong. but if i'm right, i like the way you wrote it. mournful and beautiful, unlike most of the soppy breakup poems. i especially loved theses lines 'Mending the cracks and fixing the deep gashes,guarding the secrets that were her nightmare flashes' and the ending. great poem
5/5/2006 c1 arcane devices
Ooh quite angsty... Great metaphor, and imagery. I look forward to your next piece. - ADD-san
Ooh quite angsty... Great metaphor, and imagery. I look forward to your next piece. - ADD-san
4/28/2006 c1 51Kusje
Mm. I think that everybody living their lives has experienced something like this. I know I have..
Great poem.
Keep it up!
51KusjeMm. I think that everybody living their lives has experienced something like this. I know I have..
Great poem.
Keep it up!
4/28/2006 c1 24frayedlifeforce
i liked the way you wrote this, and i really loved the last verse especially. the last line was very strong even if her heart was about to break.some wonderful imagery in this.
24frayedlifeforcei liked the way you wrote this, and i really loved the last verse especially. the last line was very strong even if her heart was about to break.some wonderful imagery in this.
4/24/2006 c1 Herminia
I like your poem. I love the tone. It's so solemn, which makes it all the more better considering the suicidal/depressing topic. Great job. You described it beautifully.
I really liked this: "every drop fell across your palms,/staining,them with her painful memories"
Wonderful!
I like your poem. I love the tone. It's so solemn, which makes it all the more better considering the suicidal/depressing topic. Great job. You described it beautifully.
I really liked this: "every drop fell across your palms,/staining,them with her painful memories"
Wonderful!
4/24/2006 c1 28emilyrachel18
Alex this must definately be the best poem you have written to date! I love the way you express the ending that her little heart is about to break i feel that way all the time. And the secrets that were her nightmare flashes? Where are you getting this from because it is excellant! I honestly think you should keep up your writing Alex because it speaks about your soul so clearly and by your words you are helping so many people. Keep it up!
28emilyrachel18Alex this must definately be the best poem you have written to date! I love the way you express the ending that her little heart is about to break i feel that way all the time. And the secrets that were her nightmare flashes? Where are you getting this from because it is excellant! I honestly think you should keep up your writing Alex because it speaks about your soul so clearly and by your words you are helping so many people. Keep it up!
4/17/2006 c1 298Moon-Chaser
That was beautifully done, such emotions and the images that your words invoked.
Keep it up.
298Moon-ChaserThat was beautifully done, such emotions and the images that your words invoked.
Keep it up.