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5/5/2006 c1 Korashio
To me I get the message of a family with out God. Kind of reminds me of my dads side of the family. My moms side we go to church and all but my dads side is completely opposite. So in a way i think of my own family whem i read this. It's written very well too. Your an awesome writer.
5/5/2006 c1 justateardrop
'Where should I put in my token?And where should I kneel to plead?This family I fear has been brokenNo more mother and father and me' i love that stanza... i really like the structure repetition and the rhythm. the rhetorical questions are amazing - especially 'exactly who goes to heaven?/ and can i insure a seat' and 'how do you recruit an angel'. beautiful. lovely work!
4/14/2006 c1 858Anna178
Damn...not even exaggerating, I really love this poem. "How do you recruit an angel?" especially the lines around that one, and including it. I think that's a really powerful point of the poem. Well...anyway, BRILLIANT! or whatever even if it does sound phony.

ANNA

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