for Who Dares Judge?5/24/2006 c1 Christy
Very stern and defiant. *nods*Love it!
Very stern and defiant. *nods*Love it!
5/22/2006 c1 
30Sugar-Craze
I usually don't like rhyming poems, even the ones that I myself write,but this poem, although in a sense, is like a non-rhyming poem and not at the same time. Like a non-rhyming poem, you seem like this was very easy to get out and express quickly, but like the rhyming poem it is, you can sense the care and yet the swiftness it took to write this. Very well done, love the words :)
30Sugar-CrazeI usually don't like rhyming poems, even the ones that I myself write,but this poem, although in a sense, is like a non-rhyming poem and not at the same time. Like a non-rhyming poem, you seem like this was very easy to get out and express quickly, but like the rhyming poem it is, you can sense the care and yet the swiftness it took to write this. Very well done, love the words :)
4/17/2006 c1 29Scrunchy
This is good, muchly so! I especially liked the last two lines - "Because life will never be as clear
As Black and White, or even Grey."
Oh so true...Great work, I'll have to check out your story at some point =) Keep going x
29ScrunchyThis is good, muchly so! I especially liked the last two lines - "Because life will never be as clear
As Black and White, or even Grey."
Oh so true...Great work, I'll have to check out your story at some point =) Keep going x
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another excellent poem. not my favourite of yours so far but a great poem
another excellent poem. not my favourite of yours so far but a great poem