for Fine4/26/2006 c1 
879Moondog Dozier
Very relatable emotion. The flow works well in this. Rushes the feeling along at the right pace. Well done.
879Moondog DozierVery relatable emotion. The flow works well in this. Rushes the feeling along at the right pace. Well done.
4/13/2006 c1 2Yellow Roses
i think this is one of my favourites from you :) nice writing (and rhyming:P)
2Yellow Rosesi think this is one of my favourites from you :) nice writing (and rhyming:P)