for The Us Preview8/17/2006 c1 
9Michael Gerard
Ooh... interesting. I'm reminded - by 'Amy' - of a kids' show I watched when I was - well, a kid - called "Charlie Chalk" or something, about a kid whose chalk he used to make drawings come to life. Anyways, great preview. There is a small number of spelling errors, but I look forward to reading more, so do upate!
9Michael GerardOoh... interesting. I'm reminded - by 'Amy' - of a kids' show I watched when I was - well, a kid - called "Charlie Chalk" or something, about a kid whose chalk he used to make drawings come to life. Anyways, great preview. There is a small number of spelling errors, but I look forward to reading more, so do upate!
4/13/2006 c1 Trinity Morgan
Ooh, sounds very very interesting. I can only hope that you'll update soon!
~Sayonara~
Ooh, sounds very very interesting. I can only hope that you'll update soon!
~Sayonara~