for Gone With A BANG3/23/2013 c15 K
I love this story you should finish it please :'(
I love this story you should finish it please :'(
1/18/2013 c15 R. Ficst
here you have Dominique telling Bastien that Harley told him about killing Paliff, but last chapter Bastien told him himself.
here you have Dominique telling Bastien that Harley told him about killing Paliff, but last chapter Bastien told him himself.
1/18/2013 c14 R. Ficst
just fyi, in the first half, Bastien's POV, you actually switch to Dominique's POV without any notice partway through.
just fyi, in the first half, Bastien's POV, you actually switch to Dominique's POV without any notice partway through.
6/20/2012 c15 
2Bananafishh
Awwwww I love this story! But it looks like you're never gonna update again :'(. And just as their relationship (giddiness lol) started. Please update eventually, pretty please xx
2BananafishhAwwwww I love this story! But it looks like you're never gonna update again :'(. And just as their relationship (giddiness lol) started. Please update eventually, pretty please xx
4/7/2012 c15 anydayanywhere
This is a really great story, plot, character development etc. I definitely enjoyed reading the 15 chapters of the story so far. Can't wait for the next time you'll update.
This is a really great story, plot, character development etc. I definitely enjoyed reading the 15 chapters of the story so far. Can't wait for the next time you'll update.
6/21/2011 c15 Rainsoaked Archangel
*leaps fantastically high up and down* More story! More story! This is some of the best ever! I love these characters! I love poor Bastien/Autumn with his split personality and awesome half-dragon-ness (which I totally guessed!) and hotness andm age powers, and I love Harlequinn (GREAT NAME) with his jovial spazz attitude and sad past w/ his little brother and the way he keeps staring at Bastien's ass! PLEASE WRITE MORE, YOU ARE AMAZING!
*leaps fantastically high up and down* More story! More story! This is some of the best ever! I love these characters! I love poor Bastien/Autumn with his split personality and awesome half-dragon-ness (which I totally guessed!) and hotness andm age powers, and I love Harlequinn (GREAT NAME) with his jovial spazz attitude and sad past w/ his little brother and the way he keeps staring at Bastien's ass! PLEASE WRITE MORE, YOU ARE AMAZING!
6/21/2011 c5 Rainsoaked Archangel
I really love this story! And yes, I got the motorcycle reference, so continue updating please!
I really love this story! And yes, I got the motorcycle reference, so continue updating please!
6/21/2011 c1 Rainsoaked Archangel
Wow, really good! You've done a really good job of creating unique personas within the group, and your writing flows well with stale spots. I can tell this isn't one of those shallow, fluffy stereotype yaoi stories shot off in a puff of glitter from the imagination of a fangirl with 6-year-old maturity. You have real people in this story! Keep up the good work!
Wow, really good! You've done a really good job of creating unique personas within the group, and your writing flows well with stale spots. I can tell this isn't one of those shallow, fluffy stereotype yaoi stories shot off in a puff of glitter from the imagination of a fangirl with 6-year-old maturity. You have real people in this story! Keep up the good work!
5/12/2011 c15 Lexia Rise
Happy that Bastien finally coming out of his shell, yay!
Ah, and the waiting period begins... XP
An amazing story you have going here - I love your characters and their personalities, especially Dom XD lol, wish my dad was like that!
Talented writer you are!
Happy that Bastien finally coming out of his shell, yay!
Ah, and the waiting period begins... XP
An amazing story you have going here - I love your characters and their personalities, especially Dom XD lol, wish my dad was like that!
Talented writer you are!
3/19/2011 c15 4Morgan Stepanov
F... THIS IS SO GOD!
Finally another sci-fi military slash story! They're so rare! And yet it's incomplete! Oh the pain! ;o;
It's been too long I know but... YEESH it should update! Besides, they were just starting to get cuddly~!
-DxH
4Morgan StepanovF... THIS IS SO GOD!
Finally another sci-fi military slash story! They're so rare! And yet it's incomplete! Oh the pain! ;o;
It's been too long I know but... YEESH it should update! Besides, they were just starting to get cuddly~!
-DxH