for The Tale of Henry11/7/2006 c6 
306Ashelin
Yay! More story. That Hero, he is kind of...yeah...Anyway, nice job. Can't wait to read more. I loved the 20 questions, but who was it? Haha.
306AshelinYay! More story. That Hero, he is kind of...yeah...Anyway, nice job. Can't wait to read more. I loved the 20 questions, but who was it? Haha.
11/4/2006 c6 DeafnotDumb
Utterly, Utterly and brilliantly crazy. with a lovey and weird commuinity. so, keep up the good work!
Signed, DeafnotDumb
Utterly, Utterly and brilliantly crazy. with a lovey and weird commuinity. so, keep up the good work!
Signed, DeafnotDumb
11/1/2006 c6 13misterfuzzums EXTREME
Ha. Short and to the point.
20 questions...
This was good stuff. Keep it upzorz.
13misterfuzzums EXTREMEHa. Short and to the point.
20 questions...
This was good stuff. Keep it upzorz.
7/30/2006 c5 misterfuzzums EXTREME
Hee... copulating... dogs are stupid that way...
Now I get hackneyed: Funny chapter, write some more soon, kzorz?
I'm serious. Cya
Hee... copulating... dogs are stupid that way...
Now I get hackneyed: Funny chapter, write some more soon, kzorz?
I'm serious. Cya
7/27/2006 c5 306Ashelin
Haha, love this stuff. Hehe, great job. I like the dog part...and the "star pupil cheating on a test"...hahaha, keep it coming!
306AshelinHaha, love this stuff. Hehe, great job. I like the dog part...and the "star pupil cheating on a test"...hahaha, keep it coming!
7/15/2006 c4 13misterfuzzums EXTREME
Roxors 2 da max. I had a message from my mentor that told me to say that about this story. Roxors 2 da max, I mean. I suppose...
Dog had a disappointingly small amount of dialogue in this chapter. But I liked Catwoman's moving lines: "Then come on!" I can feel her inner turmoil rising through her brusque and somewhat licentious manner.
And I liked the chapter too...
13misterfuzzums EXTREMERoxors 2 da max. I had a message from my mentor that told me to say that about this story. Roxors 2 da max, I mean. I suppose...
Dog had a disappointingly small amount of dialogue in this chapter. But I liked Catwoman's moving lines: "Then come on!" I can feel her inner turmoil rising through her brusque and somewhat licentious manner.
And I liked the chapter too...
7/5/2006 c4 306Ashelin
FINALLY! Do you know how long I have been waiting? Well, I suppose it was worth it. Now, go do some more writing, the story is getting better every time.
306AshelinFINALLY! Do you know how long I have been waiting? Well, I suppose it was worth it. Now, go do some more writing, the story is getting better every time.
7/1/2006 c4 9GryffindorsQueen
very good, this is extremely amusing. i suppose this is one of the few stories where a little bit more description would kill it. loved it VERY much!
9GryffindorsQueenvery good, this is extremely amusing. i suppose this is one of the few stories where a little bit more description would kill it. loved it VERY much!
6/3/2006 c3 13misterfuzzums EXTREME
Rofl. This is a hilarious parody of fantasy. I like how you made it like 89.34597 percent dialogue, and only like 10.65403 percent prose. It kept the story going and made it seem more unique. Keep it goin', or else... I'll, um... grow a beard.
13misterfuzzums EXTREMERofl. This is a hilarious parody of fantasy. I like how you made it like 89.34597 percent dialogue, and only like 10.65403 percent prose. It kept the story going and made it seem more unique. Keep it goin', or else... I'll, um... grow a beard.
4/13/2006 c1 306Ashelin
I love it, the whole thing. And your sister is crazy, fantasy is the best, AND it is true literature. Stupid realistic/science fiction people. Joking, your sister isn't stupid. I just love fantasy, FOREVER! Great story, great plot, very original and hilarious. I like the way you modernized medievil. Great job!
306AshelinI love it, the whole thing. And your sister is crazy, fantasy is the best, AND it is true literature. Stupid realistic/science fiction people. Joking, your sister isn't stupid. I just love fantasy, FOREVER! Great story, great plot, very original and hilarious. I like the way you modernized medievil. Great job!