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4/13/2006 c1 48Vyvyan
Sad...but well writen. Nicely done.
4/13/2006 c1 73fading innocence
Pretty good, but I would suggest changing the line "You broke my heart, and I haven't learned" to "You broke my heart, and I still haven't learned". It'll flow better.

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