for Denial Spree3/15/2007 c1 
88Icthoid Matro Coselos
so much said in so few words... that's the way of a real poet... amazing, simply amazing. I love your work... please post more, i'll be waiting! (or e-mail it to me, whatever... i'm a definite fan...give me that which i dote for!)KEEP WRITING AND POSTING!
88Icthoid Matro Coselosso much said in so few words... that's the way of a real poet... amazing, simply amazing. I love your work... please post more, i'll be waiting! (or e-mail it to me, whatever... i'm a definite fan...give me that which i dote for!)KEEP WRITING AND POSTING!
6/27/2006 c1 157darkmistresslae
Whoa. Nice poem. I love the first two lines. They open the entire poem really well. The second stanza really hit me. It was eerie, true, exeptional.
Great poem, as always, I love it
157darkmistresslaeWhoa. Nice poem. I love the first two lines. They open the entire poem really well. The second stanza really hit me. It was eerie, true, exeptional.
Great poem, as always, I love it
4/30/2006 c1 1Shiba-.-Sempai
I find it oddly ironic that I waited the longest to review the poem that affected me the most.
The emotion and power you've managed to convey in these three short blocks of writing is incredible. The first stanza alone felt like a flame of feelings - burning and painful to touch. "Scars itch to live upon my wrists" So very much is held in that short line - pain and suffering and an aching to release it in any way you can. The important thing is to find better ways than scars to release it, like writing poems. (Winces at moronic nature of statement. Like you're not doing that already...)
My favorite line, however, was "My wishes made on broken stars." I can't even begin to describe how fantastically incredible the images it conveys are. *Sighs in wonder* So amazing... It sort of makes me want to order a brand new star for you to wish on, though. Just for the principle of the thing.
1Shiba-.-SempaiI find it oddly ironic that I waited the longest to review the poem that affected me the most.
The emotion and power you've managed to convey in these three short blocks of writing is incredible. The first stanza alone felt like a flame of feelings - burning and painful to touch. "Scars itch to live upon my wrists" So very much is held in that short line - pain and suffering and an aching to release it in any way you can. The important thing is to find better ways than scars to release it, like writing poems. (Winces at moronic nature of statement. Like you're not doing that already...)
My favorite line, however, was "My wishes made on broken stars." I can't even begin to describe how fantastically incredible the images it conveys are. *Sighs in wonder* So amazing... It sort of makes me want to order a brand new star for you to wish on, though. Just for the principle of the thing.
4/22/2006 c1 612simpleplan13
i like this a lot.. the last lines of each stanza are particular awesome
612simpleplan13i like this a lot.. the last lines of each stanza are particular awesome
4/20/2006 c1 141AllyCred
WOW...This is amazing, so much emotion and just fire in your words well done, i love the first stanza the most i think i can really relate to it, just pure perfection, well done!
141AllyCredWOW...This is amazing, so much emotion and just fire in your words well done, i love the first stanza the most i think i can really relate to it, just pure perfection, well done!
4/18/2006 c1 35Procrastinating Fairy
O.O! And here I thought I had you on alert and favorites! Bad Rosie! Bad! Oh, do I have some catching up to do... (though, that note is nearly pointless because you'll get the other reviews first since they'll be sent more recently... anyhow)
IT RHYMES. I LOVE YOU! Just because it rhymes it's awesome. I cannot (for the life of me!) rhyme anymore, so I love the fact that you can...
This is one of those (and greensock seems to specialize in this) poems that is short but seems longer. It's a nice affect, so do not worry, and I'm particularly fond of the line "Scars itch to live upon my wrists" for the morbidity and the last two lines for closure.
PF
35Procrastinating FairyO.O! And here I thought I had you on alert and favorites! Bad Rosie! Bad! Oh, do I have some catching up to do... (though, that note is nearly pointless because you'll get the other reviews first since they'll be sent more recently... anyhow)
IT RHYMES. I LOVE YOU! Just because it rhymes it's awesome. I cannot (for the life of me!) rhyme anymore, so I love the fact that you can...
This is one of those (and greensock seems to specialize in this) poems that is short but seems longer. It's a nice affect, so do not worry, and I'm particularly fond of the line "Scars itch to live upon my wrists" for the morbidity and the last two lines for closure.
PF
4/17/2006 c1 63silentscreamer07
Hey Leila! I feel, for some reason, like I haven't talked to you in forever! *tears* (But! I'll be seeing you soon! yayness! I can't wait!) Ne-ways, on with you're poem.
Honestly, I feel like you pulled the words that were stuck in my throat and wrote them down for me, only you wrote them with more beauty and "grace" I guess is the word I'm looking for. I could really relate to this poem. And I don't know who it is you're talking about, I want to say I kind of know, but the last time I said that I was wrong, (as I usually am):P But I loved this poem, I felt like I could really relate to it, well, partly. The fact that you know that the tears you cry, or what you do over someone is not worth it, but yet you still do it. That I could defintly relate to.
My favorite lines were:
"I know that you're worth none of it,Not one drop from the throats you slitBut I can't help that I'm wide open,Bent so far, I'm almost broken."
I think mainly because, that was the stanza I felt I related to the most.
And I miss the way things used to be too...when we were all younger, but once you grow up, innocence is faded away. But, I think it makes us all stronger, to help us face the next obstacle that comes down our way.
I loved this poem. *hugs* and I cant wait to see you! AHH! I'm so excited! 44 more days! woot woot, lol, just hope i dont get lost at the airport..*sigh* knowing me, i just might. ne ways, hope to talk to ya soon. Miss and Love ya bunches! Buhbyes
~britney~
63silentscreamer07Hey Leila! I feel, for some reason, like I haven't talked to you in forever! *tears* (But! I'll be seeing you soon! yayness! I can't wait!) Ne-ways, on with you're poem.
Honestly, I feel like you pulled the words that were stuck in my throat and wrote them down for me, only you wrote them with more beauty and "grace" I guess is the word I'm looking for. I could really relate to this poem. And I don't know who it is you're talking about, I want to say I kind of know, but the last time I said that I was wrong, (as I usually am):P But I loved this poem, I felt like I could really relate to it, well, partly. The fact that you know that the tears you cry, or what you do over someone is not worth it, but yet you still do it. That I could defintly relate to.
My favorite lines were:
"I know that you're worth none of it,Not one drop from the throats you slitBut I can't help that I'm wide open,Bent so far, I'm almost broken."
I think mainly because, that was the stanza I felt I related to the most.
And I miss the way things used to be too...when we were all younger, but once you grow up, innocence is faded away. But, I think it makes us all stronger, to help us face the next obstacle that comes down our way.
I loved this poem. *hugs* and I cant wait to see you! AHH! I'm so excited! 44 more days! woot woot, lol, just hope i dont get lost at the airport..*sigh* knowing me, i just might. ne ways, hope to talk to ya soon. Miss and Love ya bunches! Buhbyes
~britney~
4/13/2006 c1 Eloquent-Marionette
"i know that you're worth none of it/not one drop from the throats you slit/buti can't help that i'm wide open/bent so far i'm almost broken" those lines were my favorite. i feel like this so many times to so many different people. i ask myself "what the heck am i doing? why am i KILLING myself over them? they aren't worth it but i can't stop!" i really loved this poem leila. i feel like i can really relate to it. i loved it! it had good flow, rhyme and awesome imagry. i hope u keep writing forever and always! great job on this! 9and can't wait to see u soon):P
luv always and forever,~Davida
P.S. take a quick glance at my FP account (*sigh*) it looks so...empty. (sorta like how i feel)
"i know that you're worth none of it/not one drop from the throats you slit/buti can't help that i'm wide open/bent so far i'm almost broken" those lines were my favorite. i feel like this so many times to so many different people. i ask myself "what the heck am i doing? why am i KILLING myself over them? they aren't worth it but i can't stop!" i really loved this poem leila. i feel like i can really relate to it. i loved it! it had good flow, rhyme and awesome imagry. i hope u keep writing forever and always! great job on this! 9and can't wait to see u soon):P
luv always and forever,~Davida
P.S. take a quick glance at my FP account (*sigh*) it looks so...empty. (sorta like how i feel)