for Okay, This is War on Crack4/14/2006 c1 burkle
Review time. Sorry, I'm a little distracted by the whole shitload of stuff I need to do before I go home later, but I'll try.
DrunkJohn is hilarious, and I love him. "Good story." HE! That's exactly what drunks say, though usually it's after somebody telling a funny story about some other time they were drunk, but using it out of context just makes John funnier. Poor Stan, not only does he hook up with some random whore, but he does it at their apartment, and she has to clean up his vomit. Poor Stan. Sucks to be her in this chapter.
Review time. Sorry, I'm a little distracted by the whole shitload of stuff I need to do before I go home later, but I'll try.
DrunkJohn is hilarious, and I love him. "Good story." HE! That's exactly what drunks say, though usually it's after somebody telling a funny story about some other time they were drunk, but using it out of context just makes John funnier. Poor Stan, not only does he hook up with some random whore, but he does it at their apartment, and she has to clean up his vomit. Poor Stan. Sucks to be her in this chapter.
4/14/2006 c1 
6TechEmpath1
FP keeps kicking me out today dunno why.
Are you reposting WOC or is this just a short called the same?
Either way, I liked it. Poor Stan, if that had been me I probably would have walked out and left him to fix everything when he woke up.
Great job!
6TechEmpath1FP keeps kicking me out today dunno why.
Are you reposting WOC or is this just a short called the same?
Either way, I liked it. Poor Stan, if that had been me I probably would have walked out and left him to fix everything when he woke up.
Great job!