for Plums3/12/2007 c1 
47PM20
Wow, I love the imagery. I had a wonderful picture full of color and life while reading each line. I especially love the line about figurative abortion, not in a morbid way, but you have used in a way that I had never though to use it. Great work.
47PM20Wow, I love the imagery. I had a wonderful picture full of color and life while reading each line. I especially love the line about figurative abortion, not in a morbid way, but you have used in a way that I had never though to use it. Great work.
9/11/2006 c1 18theatrical rhapsodies
This I really like. It kind of takes you away from it all you know?
18theatrical rhapsodiesThis I really like. It kind of takes you away from it all you know?
9/11/2006 c1 77by His blood
just so you know, i don't want attention or sympathy from others when i write. i hate when people judge me like that without knowing me. i write to vent, but since i can't seem to get that point through to you (like too many people, you have the typical bias against anything you view as emo), i give up. think of me what you want. good luck with writing.
77by His bloodjust so you know, i don't want attention or sympathy from others when i write. i hate when people judge me like that without knowing me. i write to vent, but since i can't seem to get that point through to you (like too many people, you have the typical bias against anything you view as emo), i give up. think of me what you want. good luck with writing.
4/14/2006 c1 6TechEmpath1
Again, a good poem. Cryptic a bit, but those kind are the best, they keep you thinking
great job
6TechEmpath1Again, a good poem. Cryptic a bit, but those kind are the best, they keep you thinking
great job
4/13/2006 c1 8lydia is pretty
HAHA one of the best summaries ever.
As always, the descriptions and wording are flawless. You have a gift in poetry that 99% of this site lacks. And I appreciate you for it.
8lydia is prettyHAHA one of the best summaries ever.
As always, the descriptions and wording are flawless. You have a gift in poetry that 99% of this site lacks. And I appreciate you for it.