9/5/2011 c1 Sepulchred
'a carosel round'n'round til she's dizzy' is pretty much how I felt reading this, and all I can tell you is this: I think you're a fucking genius.

4/14/2006 c1 42crinkled aster ribbon
brilliant. absolutely brilliant.

i like this style. it's refreshing and clever.

wonderful job. keep up the great work!

4/14/2006 c1 breezy nostrils
i thought this was a real good story poem. you basically sumed up the story in a poem. great write!

4/14/2006 c1 189oxytocin
This is amazing... you obviously have a very alternative way of thinking! This takes the reader on such an explorative and imaginative journey... it's hard to believe this came out of your head. Abstract and brilliant.

casandr