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again a really good chapter! i love the contrast between

addison and michaels characters and the way they feel, and its almost as though theres something more to it. keep it up!
i really like this chapter and the character of

michael thats building up and developing, well done!
10/2/2006 c10 7bright-silver-star
finally a new one...yay!lol...i dunno why u dont like the chapter it sounds good to me...update soon

10/2/2006 c10 15x-kit-x
Yay! Need I mention how long it took you? (A) Another great chapter so keep it up, the introduction of the new characters seems to be working well and i'm looking forward to seeing Addys relationship with them (especially Tyler!) develop. I did notice a few small errors but nothing too difficult to fix. Good luck :) Oh and update soon.
7/12/2006 c9 x-kit-x
Yay another great chapter! Keep up the good work and update quicker :D I'm glad that they're actually seeming to get somewhere and I can't wait to find out what you have instore for them next :D
7/11/2006 c8 4MartyMcFlyHasMyShoes
Hey, I've just caught up with this- looking forward to seeing what happens next, Michael and Addy seem to be going round in circles, I'm wondering if they really can stop fighting... good job.
6/26/2006 c8 7bright-silver-star
great new chapter..cant ait to hear more
6/19/2006 c8 5Pokey831
I liked this chapter. It was kinda short though, it left me hanging. So I'm really looking forward to the next one! Oh, and by the way, I want to ask you something. On chapter 23, you said that you had expected something like that to happen, and you thought I'd take it further, but you liked what I did better. What did you have in mind? I'm kinda curious. Lol. But anywayz, keep up the great work!
6/18/2006 c8 15x-kit-x
Another great chapter, keep up the great work. You've established the characters really well and I really like both Addy's and Black's personality and they're easily related to. My only criticism would be that your chapters are still a little on the short side.
6/3/2006 c7 5Pokey831
This was really good. I'm looking forward to seeing how Addy reacts to that.
6/2/2006 c7 7bright-silver-star
i love the story ..cant wait to read more
5/21/2006 c7 15x-kit-x
Loved this chapter, good luck with your GCSES. Cant wait to see how addy retaliates now, i can totally relate to michaels quick temper there... I always seem to say stuff that i regret...
5/10/2006 c6 5Pokey831
Good chapter. Things are getting really interesting. I'm looking forward to seeing what comes next!
5/10/2006 c6 15x-kit-x
Well that was crap... no seriously it was great. The only thing that could make it better is more *hint - update soon :D*. I really like where this is going and i can't wait to read more :)
5/7/2006 c5 x-kit-x
Aw better luck next time michael. i really enjoy reading this story, even though its different to what i would normally read. PLEASE update soon :)
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