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5/5/2006 c5 4MartyMcFlyHasMyShoes
Hey, I'm still enjoying this, just got a chance to catch up to the end so far. I like how you switch between POV, it's nice to see into both their heads, and I think it works well with this story, seeing as Addy and Michael are so polarised in how they feel about each other! Looking forward to the next chapter.
4/30/2006 c4 15x-kit-x
Another great chapter but I did notice a small error towards the end of the second paragraph. You said "before lesson start anyway." shouldn't it be lessons? Well done all the same and i can't wait for the next chapter.
4/30/2006 c3 x-kit-x
Another great chapter, and i'd hardly call your attempts at humour poor. I'd just like to say that I really like your style of writing; the dialogue seems natural and unforced and real people actually talk your characters. I find that too many authors write dialogue that just doesnt seem authentic.
4/27/2006 c1 9Mistress-of-Fire
Thanks for the review. BTW, your story is great! I'm off to read the next chapter!
4/22/2006 c2 8bagelmoo
Yay, this sounds like it could turn out to be a really cute story. I'm excited to read more, so please write more!
4/22/2006 c2 4MartyMcFlyHasMyShoes
Hey, I'm enjoying this so far. Pretty intriguing and I'm looking forward to reading more!
4/20/2006 c2 15x-kit-x
Another nice chapter,and though its a little on the short side i really like it. The character's are really interesting - nice mix of feelings between addison and michael *sarcastic*. Can't wait to find out what happens between them :D
4/19/2006 c1 5Pokey831
I like it. Very deep. Are you going to change the point of view throughout the story? As a suggestion, I think it would add a lot more to the story. Just an idea. Anyway, I'm looking forward to reading more.
4/14/2006 c1 5Kaliska Mabli Garrett
Michael seems like a very interesting character. He seems pathetically love sick and a bit obsessed. But at the same time he has likeable qualities. He’s confident and humorous. For some reason I feel like he is the arrogant class clown goof ball and she might be a cheerleader type. But I guess I will have to wait and see. Good work so far and I cant wait to read more! By the way, thanks for the review.

P.S. - I added you to my author alert list.
4/14/2006 c1 7Ron R
Pretty good for your first bit of writing. I like it, it's cute. I want to know what's going to happen next.
4/14/2006 c1 15x-kit-x
I really like the opening chapter, it's a great introduction to what i'm sure will be a great story. Can't wait to find out what happens between the pair.
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