5/5/2006 c5 4MartyMcFlyHasMyShoes
Hey, I'm still enjoying this, just got a chance to catch up to the end so far. I like how you switch between POV, it's nice to see into both their heads, and I think it works well with this story, seeing as Addy and Michael are so polarised in how they feel about each other! Looking forward to the next chapter.

4/30/2006 c3 x-kit-x
Another great chapter, and i'd hardly call your attempts at humour poor. I'd just like to say that I really like your style of writing; the dialogue seems natural and unforced and real people actually talk your characters. I find that too many authors write dialogue that just doesnt seem authentic.

4/22/2006 c2 8bagelmoo
Yay, this sounds like it could turn out to be a really cute story. I'm excited to read more, so please write more!

4/20/2006 c2 15x-kit-x
Another nice chapter,and though its a little on the short side i really like it. The character's are really interesting - nice mix of feelings between addison and michael *sarcastic*. Can't wait to find out what happens between them :D

4/14/2006 c1 5Kaliska Mabli Garrett
Michael seems like a very interesting character. He seems pathetically love sick and a bit obsessed. But at the same time he has likeable qualities. He’s confident and humorous. For some reason I feel like he is the arrogant class clown goof ball and she might be a cheerleader type. But I guess I will have to wait and see. Good work so far and I cant wait to read more! By the way, thanks for the review.

P.S. - I added you to my author alert list.

4/14/2006 c1 15x-kit-x
I really like the opening chapter, it's a great introduction to what i'm sure will be a great story. Can't wait to find out what happens between the pair.