for Edge of the World7/15/2006 c7 Alenor
heya, this was a good chappie. poor kit, zoey's got the complete wrong idea hasn't she? she's gonna say they were kissing or something! i can't wait to see what happens ~ Alenor.
heya, this was a good chappie. poor kit, zoey's got the complete wrong idea hasn't she? she's gonna say they were kissing or something! i can't wait to see what happens ~ Alenor.
7/3/2006 c6 Alenor
heya, this was great, i can't wait for more. wow! big move for you, hope nothing got lost in transit :) cya later ~ Alenor.
heya, this was great, i can't wait for more. wow! big move for you, hope nothing got lost in transit :) cya later ~ Alenor.
5/8/2006 c5 
23firestar267
Hey, just finished reading your two latest chapters and they're both great! I havnt got any constructive criticism for you, just my praise! Poor Kit though! Hope it all works out, please keep writing, this is really good!
23firestar267Hey, just finished reading your two latest chapters and they're both great! I havnt got any constructive criticism for you, just my praise! Poor Kit though! Hope it all works out, please keep writing, this is really good!
5/6/2006 c5 Alenor
hm...good chappie. can't wait for more though. poor kit but, i think she's falling for eddie. actually it would all work out if zoey and ollie got together...then kit and eddie could. cya later.
hm...good chappie. can't wait for more though. poor kit but, i think she's falling for eddie. actually it would all work out if zoey and ollie got together...then kit and eddie could. cya later.
5/6/2006 c4 LazyDaze06
hey. i like the story so far. i'm sorry, but i'm not much of a constructive critism person. i just wish the chapters were longer, but you've got the main points down without cutting it off early or dragging it out, so i guess you could call them the right length, lol.
hey. i like the story so far. i'm sorry, but i'm not much of a constructive critism person. i just wish the chapters were longer, but you've got the main points down without cutting it off early or dragging it out, so i guess you could call them the right length, lol.
5/4/2006 c4 Parisa
really liking this so far, but then again i like all your stuff :) you have a thing for skinny guys with long hair, dylan, kev, now eddie...lol looking forward to the next chapter.
really liking this so far, but then again i like all your stuff :) you have a thing for skinny guys with long hair, dylan, kev, now eddie...lol looking forward to the next chapter.
4/21/2006 c2 bagelmoo
Wow, this is off to a great start! I really liked all the description of the tiny town and definitely the window into Kit's feelings. I really feel for her!
Wow, this is off to a great start! I really liked all the description of the tiny town and definitely the window into Kit's feelings. I really feel for her!
4/16/2006 c2 Alenor
poor kit! i can't wait for some more to see if something good happens for her. why didn't she just ask to move to germany with her dad and go to a school over there? it would have been just like an exchange program only it would be with her dad...ahh well, can't wait for more ~ Alenor.
poor kit! i can't wait for some more to see if something good happens for her. why didn't she just ask to move to germany with her dad and go to a school over there? it would have been just like an exchange program only it would be with her dad...ahh well, can't wait for more ~ Alenor.