for Chasing Princes9/6/2015 c1 Guest
ANA MILA
ANA MILA
5/1/2015 c19 lovina.dickson.3
it z so amazing pls continue it n pls pst it on my timeline on facebook as Lovina Dickson i will be so grateful if u will b able 2 do so 4 me i hope u don't mind tanks
it z so amazing pls continue it n pls pst it on my timeline on facebook as Lovina Dickson i will be so grateful if u will b able 2 do so 4 me i hope u don't mind tanks
3/7/2014 c19 Lilly
I love your story!
Now
Please. Write. More. Before. I. Die. Of. Suspense.
Thanks...But seriously...PLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEASE
I love your story!
Now
Please. Write. More. Before. I. Die. Of. Suspense.
Thanks...But seriously...PLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEASE
11/2/2012 c19 Steff
OMG nooooooooooooooooooooooooooo oooooooooooooooooooooooooooo ooooo. There has to be more! I'm so darn addicted to this story I need to know what happens next! Write some more! Please I beg of you, I haven't read a good story in such a long time. They are so hard to come by. I need my Chasing Princes Fix!
Somebody! Help!
LOL
but seriously. Write. The. Rest. Of. The. Story. Before. I. Die.
Thank you _
OMG nooooooooooooooooooooooooooo oooooooooooooooooooooooooooo ooooo. There has to be more! I'm so darn addicted to this story I need to know what happens next! Write some more! Please I beg of you, I haven't read a good story in such a long time. They are so hard to come by. I need my Chasing Princes Fix!
Somebody! Help!
LOL
but seriously. Write. The. Rest. Of. The. Story. Before. I. Die.
Thank you _
11/2/2012 c18 Steff
I'm sincerely sorry anyone actually called you a plagiarizer. In fact I do not believe you are. In my opinion, yes, there are similarities and parallels in your story to other fairy tales but it is perfectly fine to find inspiration in amazing stories such as ancient fairy tales that have been a comfort and a base for imagination in all of us when we were young and even as we get older.
Do not take such comments to heart. People love to scrutinize and pass judgement on other people and their creations without even knowing the full story or much past there tiny little ideal they can hardly defend. So when situations or statements like that arise again know that there are so many people out there that out weigh the number of people passing judgement and falsely accusing you of doing something you didn't that believe in you and love your work and wish for you to continue writing and creating masterpieces such as this without worry or stress of impressing on your mind.
Keep up the good work and for all of those who doubt you or have nonconstructive opinions about your work, simply say #$% you :)
I'm sincerely sorry anyone actually called you a plagiarizer. In fact I do not believe you are. In my opinion, yes, there are similarities and parallels in your story to other fairy tales but it is perfectly fine to find inspiration in amazing stories such as ancient fairy tales that have been a comfort and a base for imagination in all of us when we were young and even as we get older.
Do not take such comments to heart. People love to scrutinize and pass judgement on other people and their creations without even knowing the full story or much past there tiny little ideal they can hardly defend. So when situations or statements like that arise again know that there are so many people out there that out weigh the number of people passing judgement and falsely accusing you of doing something you didn't that believe in you and love your work and wish for you to continue writing and creating masterpieces such as this without worry or stress of impressing on your mind.
Keep up the good work and for all of those who doubt you or have nonconstructive opinions about your work, simply say #$% you :)
11/2/2012 c15 Steff
Hey there,
I think your story line is wonderful. It reminds me of a few different stories from time to time but then there always comes some sort of twist and I'm not comparing it anymore. So far it's been a really good read. I haven't put it down lol (so to speak). There are some spelling mistakes. But I know what thats like, I'm a writer myself and sometimes no matter how many times you proof read something you just don't see a couple of the mistakes. All in all I'd have to say WELL DONE. I'm going to finish your story so I'll leave a finishing comment with my thoughts at the last chapter. KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK.
Cheers.
Hey there,
I think your story line is wonderful. It reminds me of a few different stories from time to time but then there always comes some sort of twist and I'm not comparing it anymore. So far it's been a really good read. I haven't put it down lol (so to speak). There are some spelling mistakes. But I know what thats like, I'm a writer myself and sometimes no matter how many times you proof read something you just don't see a couple of the mistakes. All in all I'd have to say WELL DONE. I'm going to finish your story so I'll leave a finishing comment with my thoughts at the last chapter. KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK.
Cheers.
6/4/2012 c19 Robbyroo
I absolutely adore your story! The humor is so clever, and the storyline intriguing. Please update soon, I'm dying to know what happens next! P.S. I want an Owen, any idea where I could find one? ;) :P
I absolutely adore your story! The humor is so clever, and the storyline intriguing. Please update soon, I'm dying to know what happens next! P.S. I want an Owen, any idea where I could find one? ;) :P
5/28/2011 c19 Robbyroo
I absolutely love your story! Please update soon? I need to know what happens! Thanks for putting this up, and I hope to see more soon!
I absolutely love your story! Please update soon? I need to know what happens! Thanks for putting this up, and I hope to see more soon!
5/6/2011 c19 
8Daisy's Quill
You make me so sad. Will you ever update? It's such a good story and I love reading it, but it's not all that fun to read when it's only halfway done.
8Daisy's QuillYou make me so sad. Will you ever update? It's such a good story and I love reading it, but it's not all that fun to read when it's only halfway done.
12/14/2010 c1 1AYn SKyfighter
Your writing style is good. And I really love the characters. I can't stop but wonder if owen is the missing prince..since you keep his history hidden...
For suggestions...Well i think you are stretching the plot..nothing important actually seems to be happening...the start was good with things happening in a rush buit since she ran away not much happened except when she meets her father and probably tobby...may be you should consider shortening it...though at this stage I will advise to keep writing because till the end you wont truly know which scene is essential and which is not.
1AYn SKyfighterYour writing style is good. And I really love the characters. I can't stop but wonder if owen is the missing prince..since you keep his history hidden...
For suggestions...Well i think you are stretching the plot..nothing important actually seems to be happening...the start was good with things happening in a rush buit since she ran away not much happened except when she meets her father and probably tobby...may be you should consider shortening it...though at this stage I will advise to keep writing because till the end you wont truly know which scene is essential and which is not.