7/21/2006 c6 whacked
i do believe that these little pieces truly highlight how much talent you hold. i adored each piece, its hard to pick a favourite but i think so far i have to for whatever reason that it touched me, be Prufrock's Nemesis. There was something in that piece that was different from the others. i will admit that there are people , as you already know, certain people who leave deep impressions on us, people with spark. That piece was like one of them. I think i didn't even get half of what was said in it but i got something (intangible as it was). From your other pieces i loved the phrase "teenage poerty" genius it is. Listening to REM's Daysleeper for some reason just happened to fit with all 6 of these pieces. I think what i love most about one shots (why i write only that and poetry) is that they can be so brilliant in achieving something that one more chapter could so easily destroy. Anyway..this is brilliant and i look forward to more pieces (hah i sound like a teacher or something!)

6/22/2006 c3 special
precise, profound.

In a word: beautiful.

;)allie

P.S. sorry that my reviews are simply praise reviews. Perhaps constructive criticism is in order. Just wait 'til i find something to criticize. I'm sure there is, i'm just too caught up in the beauty of your words to find it. Maybe next time...? Sorry.

;)allie

6/21/2006 c6 11LEDlorien7
wow...once again I wonder if this actually happened. I love the way you convey an entire emotion in the description of a person. You did that in all of these. The first emotion was joy, then wonder, then defiance, then the change from sadness to happiness, and then sorrow. Or something like that. Anyway, i really like your butterflies, and i hope you continue it.

6/21/2006 c4 LEDlorien7
wow, that's pretty cool. I love rain too, but i also, am afraid of lightning (me and my dog, we cower together) I once stood out in the rain until i was soaked: in a white t-shirt (it wasn't my fault i was wearing white). It was wonderfully cleansing.

So, did this one ever happen? is it true?

6/19/2006 c6 144chaos called creation
Hey ya Plinks :)

I muchly enjoyed your one shots especially the last three. Your style seems to grow from one to the next which is especially encouraging to the rest of public as to remind us all that there's always room for improvement.

I think Prufrock's Nemesis is probably my favourite since the setting is so unique and unexpected. Plus I wrote down bits and pieces of a storm poem today so maybe that's why.=]p

I like the fifth one because it reminds me in one of the last scenes in the book Stargirl by Jerry Spinelli I always wondered about that 'hidden message' that the narrator never got to see and you wrote it in a way that was equally intriguing, so kudos.

The sixth, oh the sixth...nicely written especially the ending because after reading it I just end up sitting and waiting, almost expecting something more and for someone to magically appear and tell me the rest of the story. Kind of like an unintentional cliffhanger. Or was it intentional? Hm...

keep smilin'

4/28/2006 c3 2Overwhelming Screams
wow! this story's excellent so far, very mysterious and descriptive.

4/24/2006 c2 Rhea Valente
...

oh ... my ... giddy aunt.

Awesome. I mean... I love the repetition of "different" though it changed slightly ... and ... this girl who's ... argh! I cant describe...

stickin this on favs.

reading onwards and sideways

(1.55 in the pm)