for My Butterflies4/21/2006 c3 justanotherdeadaccount
I probably can't describe the beauty and the fragility of this so I won't try to ruin it with words.
I just want you to know it touched me, and I absolutely loved it.
I probably can't describe the beauty and the fragility of this so I won't try to ruin it with words.
I just want you to know it touched me, and I absolutely loved it.
4/19/2006 c3 free-to-dream15
wow love it so far! I like the quote in the first chapter the best but thats just me! update all your stories soon!
wow love it so far! I like the quote in the first chapter the best but thats just me! update all your stories soon!
4/18/2006 c1 
5water lorelei
Lovely quote. I like this idear you have here... kind of like 'And it's Gone' ? Hm... good. Very good.
Farewell,
*silent darkness*
5water loreleiLovely quote. I like this idear you have here... kind of like 'And it's Gone' ? Hm... good. Very good.
Farewell,
*silent darkness*
4/18/2006 c3 49Shadow Demoness413
i like it... i liked the first one best.. about the girl who smiled... that was the best so far i think... they're all good, but that one was especially touching for some reason :-)
49Shadow Demoness413i like it... i liked the first one best.. about the girl who smiled... that was the best so far i think... they're all good, but that one was especially touching for some reason :-)
4/18/2006 c3 6Scratching of my quill 1835
beautiful. i especially enjoyed the first. My wish that I could write half as well haunts my dreams.
6Scratching of my quill 1835beautiful. i especially enjoyed the first. My wish that I could write half as well haunts my dreams.
4/18/2006 c3 minute-glass
though i like reading long stories, sometimes i'm glad to just read a sweet short story like yours =] i like how your stories seem to brighten a person's day. everyone needs a story like that once in a while =]
though i like reading long stories, sometimes i'm glad to just read a sweet short story like yours =] i like how your stories seem to brighten a person's day. everyone needs a story like that once in a while =]
4/17/2006 c3 197the Stranger in the moonlight
O this was sweet and joyous, but how sad. That adults have learnt to loose such good things as god-like kites.
the Stranger in the moonlight
197the Stranger in the moonlightO this was sweet and joyous, but how sad. That adults have learnt to loose such good things as god-like kites.
the Stranger in the moonlight
4/17/2006 c2 the Stranger in the moonlight
This was lovely. It was happy and joyful and all inspiringly good things! Reading this brightend my day!
the Stranger in the moonlight
This was lovely. It was happy and joyful and all inspiringly good things! Reading this brightend my day!
the Stranger in the moonlight
4/17/2006 c1 the Stranger in the moonlight
I like this quote alot. I am going to read now.
the Stranger in the moonlight
I like this quote alot. I am going to read now.
the Stranger in the moonlight
4/17/2006 c3 Dina
Wow.This story is beautiful.I love the way you wrote it.The style kind of reminds me of the book Stargirl."I wander through the park, alone but not lonely"-That line reminds me of me.Actualy the other day someone sat next to me while I was eating lunch and asked me why I always sat alone and I said Im alone but im not lonely.That book and this story both have the same amzing descriptive quality.It's the type of description that goes a bit deeper then just whats there.It's like your not just describing the setting but your describing how the persons feels being there.It's deeper then just a description of a place because you've attached the persons thoughts and feelings to it.You describe evrything a bit more in detail then people usualy see it but you don't describe one thing in more detail then anyone would care to notice.It's just plain amazing writing and I love it.
Wow.This story is beautiful.I love the way you wrote it.The style kind of reminds me of the book Stargirl."I wander through the park, alone but not lonely"-That line reminds me of me.Actualy the other day someone sat next to me while I was eating lunch and asked me why I always sat alone and I said Im alone but im not lonely.That book and this story both have the same amzing descriptive quality.It's the type of description that goes a bit deeper then just whats there.It's like your not just describing the setting but your describing how the persons feels being there.It's deeper then just a description of a place because you've attached the persons thoughts and feelings to it.You describe evrything a bit more in detail then people usualy see it but you don't describe one thing in more detail then anyone would care to notice.It's just plain amazing writing and I love it.
4/17/2006 c3 11LEDlorien7
You have such amazing description in these. wow. What a beautiful story. Did this really happen too? these stories seem so realistic. they could happen to anybody, and they do. It takes a special person to see the wonder of the moment. To notice the miracle in the everyday. I'm rambling. I love it, it's beautiful!
11LEDlorien7You have such amazing description in these. wow. What a beautiful story. Did this really happen too? these stories seem so realistic. they could happen to anybody, and they do. It takes a special person to see the wonder of the moment. To notice the miracle in the everyday. I'm rambling. I love it, it's beautiful!
4/17/2006 c2 LEDlorien7
is this stuff, true for you? Is it you telling it, or a fictional character. What's a 'jelly-baby'? Wow, this girl, i'm in love with her just from your description. Speaking of which, your imagery is wonderful. Wow, she's wonderful. Did you actually see someone like that? Wow.
is this stuff, true for you? Is it you telling it, or a fictional character. What's a 'jelly-baby'? Wow, this girl, i'm in love with her just from your description. Speaking of which, your imagery is wonderful. Wow, she's wonderful. Did you actually see someone like that? Wow.
4/17/2006 c1 LEDlorien7
ooh, nice quotation. i like it. i've never thought of beginning a story with a quotation. good idea. :-D
ooh, nice quotation. i like it. i've never thought of beginning a story with a quotation. good idea. :-D